Insaan Jo Sochta Hai

[Masood]

Meri Shairi mein aksarriyat kalaam us dor ki hai jab mein abhi teen-age mein tha. Yeh kalaam jo abhi share karney jaa raha hoon yeh us waqt ka hai jab main ghalban abhi 15 saal ka tha. Mulahiza kijiye:

Insaan Jo Sochta hai

Insaan jo sochta hai, qismat mein woh nahin
mehboob jo chahta hai, muhabbat mein woh nahin

bohat si aasein lgata hai woh apni taqdeer sey
khawab jo dekhta hai, haqeeqat mein woh nahin

duniya ney samjhaa hai hamarey pyaar ko deewangi
jahan jo samajhta hai, chahat mein woh nahin

qafas mein tadap raha hai ik be-zubaan qaidi
aazadi jo chahta hai, hurriyat mein woh nahin

yeh sona, yeh chandi, yeh dolat tujhey mubarak ho
Masood jo chahta hai, hasra mein woh nahin

[La'hasil]

Re: Insaan Jo Sochta Hai

Wah Ithni Choti se Umar main ithna Khoobsurat Kalam :rose


Buhat Umdaah Masood :rose


khush rahyeah :)

[Yaaram]

Re: Insaan Jo Sochta Hai

wah Masood aap itni kam umri main bhi itni achi shayeiri karte thay wah :rose

[Fatima Asad]

Re: Insaan Jo Sochta Hai

aslaam_u_alikam

masood sahib aap ka yeh kalam bhi bohat achaa lagaa.
daad qubool kijiye.
shukriya

['SamRazi']

Re: Insaan Jo Sochta Hai

Insaan jo sochta hai, qismat mein woh nahin
mehboob jo chahta hai, muhabbat mein woh nahin


bohat si aasein lgata hai woh apni taqdeer sey
khawab jo dekhta hai, haqeeqat mein woh nahin



qafas mein tadap raha hai ik be-zubaan qaidi
aazadi jo chahta hai, hurriyat mein woh nahin

Buhut khoob, yeh teen ashar zada achey lagey :rose

[shy]

Re: Insaan Jo Sochta Hai

bohat khoob :thmbup:

[aik_lerki]

Re: Insaan Jo Sochta Hai

Bohaaaaat hi khoobsurat gazal hai:rose
aur yay wala shair to bohat acha hai


bohat si aasein lgata hai woh apni taqdeer sey
khawab jo dekhta hai, haqeeqat mein woh nahin

[Aania]

Re: Insaan Jo Sochta Hai

qafas mein tadap raha hai ik be-zubaan qaidi
aazadi jo chahta hai, hurriyat mein woh nahin

yeh sona, yeh chandi, yeh dolat tujhey mubarak ho
Masood jo chahta hai, hasra mein woh nahin



WOW ITS SIMPLY OFF THE HOOK DUDE.........

[Mehak]

Re: Insaan Jo Sochta Hai

qafas mein tadap raha hai ik be-zubaan qaidi
aazadi jo chahta hai, hurriyat mein woh nahin

yeh sona, yeh chandi, yeh dolat tujhey mubarak ho
Masood jo chahta hai, hasrat mein woh nahin

so sweet likha hai :) ... khoobsurat ghazal hai, khas tor par yeh last wale do ashaar :rose

[Shaim]

Re: Insaan Jo Sochta Hai

Buhaaat Khoobsorat!!!:):)

[*Rida*]

Re: Insaan Jo Sochta Hai

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose


hmmmm buht khooob

[Madiha kanwal]

Re: Insaan Jo Sochta Hai

:phool: wow bhai itni kam umer mein itni achi shairy ...Kaash hum bhi aesi ker saktey :)

[Baad-e-Saba]

Re: Insaan Jo Sochta Hai

hmmmm
nice

[Wafa]

Re: Insaan Jo Sochta Hai

wah ji aap to teenage se he itne ache shair hai........:clap:

[vajiha]

Re: Insaan Jo Sochta Hai

TEEN AGE MAIN THINKING APPROACH:masha JI
BOHAT ACHI GHAZAL HE::clap:
rose