Bawafa Larki

[Masood]

Meri yeh nazam kabhi mukamil nahin hui.... aur maloom nahin kabhi issey mukamil kar paoun ga keh nahin ....

[*Rida*]

Re: Bawafa Larki

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

aik achi BV aisi hi hoti hai :)

i wish yeh mukammal ho aur isi khobsorat andaz main

[fari]

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bohat achi aur khoubsurat gazal ha per ya namukamal nahi honi chahiya....

[Masood]

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i wish yeh mukammal ho aur isi khobsorat andaz main

per ya namukamal nahi honi chahiya

Mera apna khiyal hai keh issey mukammal nahin hona chahiye - kyun keh aik ba-wafa larki ki azmaton ka tasalsul kabhi khatam nahin hota - I'll inshaAllah keep writting on it but I won't complete it...

[fari]

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Ok jee best of luck and keep writting :rose

[*Rida*]

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Mera apna khiyal hai keh issey mukammal nahin hona chahiye - kyun keh aik ba-wafa larki ki azmaton ka tasalsul kabhi khatam nahin hota - I'll inshaAllah keep writting on it but I won't complete it...

hmmmm ...really jitna likha jai kam hoga :)

[vajiha]

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ZABERDAST :rose
I LIKE IT SOOOOOOOO MUCH .
KEEP IT UP:dua

[zapk]

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Maira khiyal hai ke yeh namukammil hi achi lagti hai,kiyunke mujhay lagta hai yeh nazm jis samt ja rahi hai agar mukammil ho gai to anjaam afsosnaak hoga aur ham sab ko is ke mukammil honay ka afsos hoga.
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Mujhay aisa laga so main ne keh diya,agar masood bhai ko bura lagay to sorry.

[Masood]

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Maira khiyal hai ke yeh namukammil hi achi lagti hai,kiyunke mujhay lagta hai yeh nazm jis samt ja rahi hai agar mukammil ho gai to anjaam afsosnaak hoga aur ham sab ko is ke mukammil honay ka afsos hoga.
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Mujhay aisa laga so main ne keh diya,agar masood bhai ko bura lagay to sorry.

Aap ney jo kuchh akhaz kiya sad-feesad sahih hai - kuchh aisi hi baat hai keh yeh nazam kabhi takmeel ki janib nahin pohanch paey gi...

[ummid]

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Meri yeh nazam kabhi mukamil nahin hui.... aur maloom nahin kabhi issey mukamil kar paoun ga keh nahin ....

ager hum poet hote tu aik nazam likhte.. BAWAFA LARKA:blush: ... aur usey mukamil bhi zaror karte ... lolzz... good bhai:rose ... aap ki nazam ka tu nahi kaihte per Inshallah aap ke khawab zaror mukamil honge:) ... khush rhaiye...:dua

[Masood]

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ager hum poet hote tu aik nazam likhte.. BAWAFA LARKA:blush: ... aur usey mukamil bhi zaror karte ... lolzz... good bhai:rose ... aap ki nazam ka tu nahi kaihte per Inshallah aap ke khawab zaror mukamil honge:) ... khush rhaiye...:dua

aap hamein kahein beta ham us bawafa larkey per likh detey hain :)

[Z.]

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^^larkey bhi BA wafa hotey hein.......Strange :P

@your poem

v nice creation (Y)

[_Dard_Aashna_]

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impressive
mukammal shayed is liye nahi kar paaye
keh wafa ka qissa kabhi takmeel ko paa he nahi saka ...

acha likhtai hain .. likhtay rahiye

[aquari]

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nice...
..bawafa larki ki wafain tu us ki zindagi k sath hi mukamil hogi...

[shahid_naman]

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hmmmm....
very nice