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tumharey bas mein agar ho to bhool jao mujheytumhein bhulaney mein shayid mujhey zamana lagey -
Re: Kuchh
Kuch kehnay ko Anginat baatein hain
Kuch ruka ruka lab-o-lehja hai
Faqt tum hee rahay ho baykhabar Masood
K kaun apna hai kaun baygana hai...
hmmm:mm: 10th line mein kuch adhora pan sa lag raha hai ....lekin khair aap likhtay hain to behter jaantay hon gay hum se ...
anyways :thmbup: Welldone ..hamesha ki tarha aapki shairi ka Ek ek lafz bohat umdah , bohat khoobsoorat peraey mein dhala huaa hai ....boht khoob
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:mm: hmmm
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Re: Kuchh
wadhya bhai bahut wadhay, aukhay painday, kiss ne kaha tha miaan dill laganay ko, abb bhugto, humein kya ;)Dheeray Dheeray Machal Aye Dill-e-Beqarar
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Re: Kuchh
Bhai Jaan behtreeN,,,,,,,,,,,
Yeh herjai kia huta hay?Comment
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Re: Kuchh
Very Nice :)
Keep It Up
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