Beloce Muhabbaton Ka Premi

[Masood]

Beloce Muhabbaton Ka Premi

Jab dil ki dharkan tez ho
aur sanso ki ley bhi charhney lagey
jab aankho mein rat-jaggey hon
aur mad-hoshi had sey bharrney lagey
jab kuchh bi dil ko bhaaey nahin
aur umeed key saaghir chhalakney lagey
jab muztir muztir raatein katein
aur din ka chain bhi ghatney lagey
.... to samajh lena keh terey jaisa
be-loce muhabaton ka premi
tumhien yaad karta hai
tumhein pyaar karta hai
tumhein pyaar karta hai
tumhein yaad karta hai
be-loce muhabbaton ka ik premi


Masood

['SamRazi']

Re: Beloce Muhabbaton Ka Premi

Buhut pyara likha hai

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Beloce Muhabbaton Ka Premi

Masood aap ne apnay ahsasaat ko boht khoobsurati k sath lafzon ki zuban bakhshi hey, kbhi kbhi insan boht kuch kehna chahta hey mugar keh nhi pata. aur kbhi kabhi sirf koi aik jumla,koi misra, koi sher achanak hi jazbon k band dreechon ko chupkay se wa kar deta hey, aur ahsasaat ki iss khoobsurati ko mehsoos karnay k liye, hassaas sa dil hona chahiye, iss se lafzon mein chuppay izhaar ko samjhna asaan ho jata hey.
shayed kuch zayada hi keh gai hoon, mugar aap ki shayeri ki tareef karnay k liye boht hi kum hey. itni pyari see nazm share karnay k liye boht Shukriya.:rose :rose

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: Beloce Muhabbaton Ka Premi

Assalaam o alekum,


waaah waaah bahooot khoob masood sahib bahooot umdeh aur zabardast kalaam likhaa aur share kiyaa aapnien dili daad qabool karien khush rahien

[Shaim]

Re: Beloce Muhabbaton Ka Premi

buhaaaaat gehriii or khoobsorat nazm:)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Beloce Muhabbaton Ka Premi

Bay'lown lafzon aur jazbon main dhali yeh tehreer pur asar saabit hui...:)

[sufiaamir]

Re: Beloce Muhabbaton Ka Premi

Good and nice

[Baad-e-Saba]

Re: Beloce Muhabbaton Ka Premi

buhat humda

[Ehsaas786]

Re: Beloce Muhabbaton Ka Premi

great,nice