Sang-e-Raah

[Masood]

Apni aik ghazal :) ..

[aik_lerki]

Re: Sang-e-Raah

Hamesha ki tarah bohat he achaa likha hai aap ny :phool:
Keep It Up :thmbup:
Alfaaz bhe bohat umdah istamal keray hain aap nay .. :rose

[Masood]

Re: Sang-e-Raah

Thanks Komal :)

[*Rida*]

Re: Sang-e-Raah

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

toooo goood ...buht khobsorat






unhain Aanu bhai kay hawalay kar dain :wk

[Masood]

Re: Sang-e-Raah

:embarasse

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Sang-e-Raah

Masood sahib
1st time aap ki koie poem read ki hay main nay infect 1st time hi aap k section main dakhil hoie hon or pehli hi tehreer nay kafi inspire kia bohot pasand aaie aap ki ghazal
aik bat pochna chahti hon 3rd shair k 2nd misray main aap nay word "sansarati" use kia hay can u pls tell me the meaning of this word or yeh typing mistake hay aap shaiyes sarsarati likhna chah rahay ho?
jawab ki muntazir
uzma khan

[Masood]

Re: Sang-e-Raah

Masood sahib
1st time aap ki koie poem read ki hay main nay infect 1st time hi aap k section main dakhil hoie hon or pehli hi tehreer nay kafi inspire kia bohot pasand aaie aap ki ghazal
aik bat pochna chahti hon 3rd shair k 2nd misray main aap nay word "sansarati" use kia hay can u pls tell me the meaning of this word or yeh typing mistake hay aap shaiyes sarsarati likhna chah rahay ho?
jawab ki muntazir
uzma khan

Uzma bilkul wohi lafz hai jo aap ney kaha - sarsarati ... typing error

Hosla afazi ka shukriyah...

[Yaaram]

Re: Sang-e-Raah

Azal se hay Tarpyaa to ne Abad tak tarpaye gi
Siwaye be wafaeu ke aur hay hi kya teri umar main
:)
Bohat zabardast :) AIk Aik Lafz kamal :)

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Sang-e-Raah

Uzma bilkul wohi lafz hai jo aap ney kaha - sarsarati ... typing error

Hosla afazi ka shukriyah...

confusion dur karnay ka bayhad shukriya

[Baad-e-Saba]

Re: Sang-e-Raah

Masood

Up to the Mark
EXCELLENT

[Omaima]

Re: Sang-e-Raah

Masood beleive me i really liked ur poetry,remember the best poet is that who elaborate the wording according to the exact feelings,doesnt matter of others of his own.But u have this Quality,not joking.missing ma country in which such a talented people r there like U.Have a nice time.Takecare.

[Masood]

Re: Sang-e-Raah

Masood beleive me i really liked ur poetry,remember the best poet is that who elaborate the wording according to the exact feelings,doesnt matter of others of his own.But u have this Quality,not joking.missing ma country in which such a talented people r there like U.Have a nice time.Takecare.

every single word of appriciation is a unique value for me to do much better and keep improving me - aap ney itney khoobsurat andaz mein meri sa'ee ko saraha - yeh merey liye kisi aezaaz sey kam nahin :)

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Sang-e-Raah

Buhat hee zbar dast...

[Gul]

Re: Sang-e-Raah

A Very Nice Poem wid A great Flow Of Sentimenst....And usage Of Words R also Very Nice! !!

[Ehsaas786]

Re: Sang-e-Raah

kitna dard hy es shairy mn ???
bhut hi omda andaaz,e bayaan ..
buhut khush rahen,dher sari daad qubol kren