My New three ghazals

[Mani16]

Dosto in me se 2 ghazalz tu ehle design section me post ho chuki hain tu me ne socha k yehaan bhi ker di jayen
agar Kisi ko esa lagay k yehaan nhi kerna chahiyen theen to Be shak delete ker dain no roblem,,,
i dnt mind

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: My New three ghazals

Masha Allah bahot khoobsurat likhtay hain aap
bahot acha andaz hai aap k likhnay ka
keep it up :rose

[thefire1]

Re: My New three ghazals

Bohat khoob Mani, inn ki pehlay bhi tareef kar chuka hoon aur ab bhi kar raha hoon kiyonki waqayi yeh tareef kay qaabil hay... kisi shaair ka kalam paish karna aur khudh apnay qalm say apni soch say likhna do alag baatain hain. aap nay waqayi poori mehnat say aik achi koshish ki hay jis kay liye aap SHUKRIYA kay haqdaar hain.. iss tarah apnay qalam main rawaani jaari rakhain aur humain apni nayi nayi shaaeri say mustafeed kartay rahain :)

[Nadia khan]

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wow very niceeeeeeeeeeee g

[hibaali]

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WOW MANI fantastic.:congrats:
good work keep it up.

[shummu]

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dekhiye maine arzi daali hai aap ke liye ek naya section banaane ki yahan admin zone mein...jaise hi ban jaata hai to aap apna kalaam wahan post kariyega alag alag thread mein aur baaqi bhi aapke kalaam main wahan move kar dungi inshallah.

aapki waqaii ye teenon ghazlein qaabil-e-taareef hai isliye ek dafa phir daad qubool karein! SHukriya...:)

Repu granted :rose

[Tanha Hassan]

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waooooooooooooooooo very nice yara

[Mahvish Waqas]

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Assalam o alaikum wr wb..

Bohat umdah ghazals kahi hain aap ne....bohat umdagi kay sath aap ne apnay ahsasaat ko lafzoon main pero kay qalam band kiya hai...
Bohat khoob...
Khush rahain...

[Nooria]

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Bohat Aala Shairy Hai:)

[Sweetestadi]

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woooo...nice ...very nice

[Sweetestadi]

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Masha allah

[Ehsaas786]

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buhut omda khyalaat,o alfaaz ka majmoa
buhut si daad qubool kren ...keep it up

[nakram]

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مجھے نیندیں نہیں بھاتی، کہ مثلِ مرگ ہوتی ہیں
مگر ایک خواب کے لالچ میں پھر سونا بھی پڑتا ہے

بہت اعلٰی یار۔۔۔ بہت اعلٰی

[Mani16]

Re: My New three ghazals

Kuch samajh nhi aarehi:mm:
kia kehoon ?
Kese Kehoon ????
Aapki In Mohabbat bhare peghamat ka kin Alfaaz me shukriaa ada karoon ???
Lafz Km arh rehe hain,
Aaki Itni Mohabbaton ka jawab dene me,
Buss yehi Kehna chahoonga k aa sub ki Duayen Or Hosla afzai hy k Is khaksaar ki itni juraat hui k kuch ker sake
Mujhay kbhi bhi itni umeed nhi thi jitni izzat se aa sub ne nawaza
Khas tor pe shukriaa adaa kerna chahoonga Mehwish , or Ahsaas (name ka mujhay nhi pta) ka jin ki Shairi Mujhay khud boht asand
Or baki sub aala zok doston ka jinhon ne itni azeerai di
Boht Boht shukriaa Dossto

[thefire1]

Re: My New three ghazals

Shukriya aap ka kay aap nay hum sab ko itna acha mawaad farahim kia aur acha mawaad kisi ki bhi tareef ka mouhtaaj nahin usay paRhnay wala khudh ba khudh uss ki tareef karay ga aur bay ikhtiyaar munn say niklay ga WAHHHHH :)

Likhtay rahain aap bohat acha likhtay hain.