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Re: !!..Khali Haath..!!
waaah
mere khali haath dekh kar
kuch logon ne woh parh liya
bahoot khoob likha hai aap ne jia
nice poetrysigpic
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Re: !!..Khali Haath..!!
Bohat khoob - bohat acha likha hay - aaik achi nazm :) likhti rahye :roseAllah
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Re: !!..Khali Haath..!!
yeh bi bohat achi nazam likhi hai MashAllah
Ek mashwara hai 3rd aur 2nd last line mein yeh likhein
"Jo Tu Na Parh Saka Kabhi Bhi"
aur phir parhain dubara apni nazam ko.Kis nooN haal sunawaN dil daa ....Koi mehram raaz nai mildaaa!
Sadly, common sense is not very common..!!Comment
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Re: !!..Khali Haath..!!
Thanx alot dear :khi:Originally posted by WASI ANJUM View Post
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Thank u soooooo much :eye:Originally posted by Yaaram View Post
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Thanx alot :)Originally posted by GumShuda View Post
ok app nay jo mashwra dia hay woh acha hay:)
jab time milla post ko edit kr k jo app nay
btaya hay woh likh doon ge:lpop:
thanx 4 ur really nice comments:comfort:
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Kis nooN haal sunawaN dil daa ....Koi mehram raaz nai mildaaa!
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Re: !!..Khali Haath..!!
Waaah Waaah......~~~~~
Bahoot khoob likha aap ne jia
Nice poetry.
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Re: !!..Khali Haath..!!
jia sahiba
bout achi poetry likhi hai app ne
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Re: !!..Khali Haath..!!
jooo too naa parhh sakaa kabhee bheee
ghairoon nayy wohhh parhh liaaaa
bohtt khooob"Can you imagine what I would do if I could do all I can? "Comment
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Re: !!..Khali Haath..!!
Passand krny ka bohat bohat shukriya :eye:Originally posted by sarfraz_qamar View Post
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