*Tere Chahat Main*

[jia]

:rose

[Shakh-e-Tamana]

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achi hai....

[WASI ANJUM]

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bahoot khoob jia

[Nadeem_khan]

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waoooooooo great jia jee,,so nice

[A.h.khan]

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jia ap ki gazal to bahot achi hae agar ap ye hayeal kaiyal ke bajaye agr ap in main jadeed alfaz ka istamal karin to or bhi achi ho jati ye gazal magar hae bahot achi
main jo samjhta hon likh deta hon ap naraz na hon plzzz
ab ap ne jo ye likha hae
kahin chor hi na jana bich raha mujh ko;;;
teri dharkano ki main to sayal si ho gai;;
is main agar adosri lin is trha likhti ke
teri dahrkano ki mujh ko adat si ho gai;;; to mere khyal main acha hota magar ap ne likha hae to yaqeenan us waqat ke halat ko samne raklh ke likha ho ga jab ap likhne bahyti hon gi

[MUTFANIN]

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Buhut Umda Jia Ji.Matla tu buhut he shandar hay.Magar yay akhre shayr mein`kael` shaed Hindi word Hay.Is ka Matlab?Waisay zael(spent)bhe istemal hosakta hay.

[jia]

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thanx alot dear frends
b happy:rose

[jia]

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jia ap ki gazal to bahot achi hae agar ap ye hayeal kaiyal ke bajaye agr ap in main jadeed alfaz ka istamal karin to or bhi achi ho jati ye gazal magar hae bahot achi
main jo samjhta hon likh deta hon ap naraz na hon plzzz
ab ap ne jo ye likha hae
kahin chor hi na jana bich raha mujh ko;;;
teri dharkano ki main to sayal si ho gai;;
is main agar adosri lin is trha likhti ke
teri dahrkano ki mujh ko adat si ho gai;;; to mere khyal main acha hota magar ap ne likha hae to yaqeenan us waqat ke halat ko samne raklh ke likha ho ga jab ap likhne bahyti hon gi

ghazal passand krny ka bohat bohat shukriya:rose
koi baat agr app likh daity hain to yeh bhi meri islaah k liay he hota hay agr main inhe say kuch seekh jaoon eg to yeh meri khush qismati ho ge
apny khiyalat say agaah krty rahain or hosla afzaie krty rhain:)
thanx alot
b happy:rose

[Rai]

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Wahooo Its Gr8

Keep It up Jia gee

[jia]

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Thanx dear frend
b happy:rose

[Rameez]

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maa bb qayaal hoo giiaa:)

boohatt piariii

[hasnain]

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ji@ ji mery pas ilfaz hai nahi k main kia lakhoon
Gr8 Gr8 sharing ji@ ji

[*Hijab*]

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nice...............:)

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

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hmm nice sharing Friend :rose

[jia]

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App sab ka bohat bohat shukriya:)
b happy:rose