*Izhaar na krna aya*

[jia]

:rose

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: *Izhaar na krna aya*

simply ...very zabardast jeee..!
buhat achi poetry ki ha aap nay..!
keep it up..!

[jia]

Re: *Izhaar na krna aya*

thanx alot
b happy:rose

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: *Izhaar na krna aya*

fantastic :em:bohot he achchey andaaz say khiyalaat ko apnay alfaaz may dhaaley hain :thmbup:
keep it up sister and share with usthmbup:

[jia]

Re: *Izhaar na krna aya*

fantastic :em:bohot he achchey andaaz say alfaaz ko apnay khiyaalaat may dhaaley hain :thmbup:
keep it up sister and share with usthmbup:

thanx alot bro:rose
b happy:rose

[khananiz]

Re: *Izhaar na krna aya*

zabardast janab........:thmbup:
keep it up........

[ahsaas]

Re: *Izhaar na krna aya*

:rose

Jia ..Is Poetry Per jitni tareef kerin kam hi lugy gi Lafzon mein Ehsaas ka sailab bah raha hai ..lafzon k khol mein jaan da di ho jese:phool:
Just Superb:thmbup:

[jia]

Re: *Izhaar na krna aya*

zabardast janab........:thmbup:
keep it up........

thanx alot
b happy:rose

Jia ..Is Poetry Per jitni tareef kerin kam hi lugy gi Lafzon mein Ehsaas ka sailab bah raha hai ..lafzon k khol mein jaan da di ho jese:phool:
Just Superb:thmbup:

:hug:
thanx alot dear
app nay kuch ziyada he tareef kr di hay:khi:
thank u so much
b happy

[refreshing_breeze]

Re: *Izhaar na krna aya*

jia jaani
ye tou kamaal kar diya hai aap ney
bohat hi khubsoorat likha hai
simply superb jaani

keep it up

[*Rida*]

Re: *Izhaar na krna aya*

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
main nay abhi PM dekha..........
buht khobsorat liakha hai Jia....aisay hi likhtay rehain...ALLAH TALAA aap ko khush rakhay

tareef tu ahsaas ko karni aati hai.......

[jia]

Re: *Izhaar na krna aya*

jia jaani
ye tou kamaal kar diya hai aap ney
bohat hi khubsoorat likha hai
simply superb jaani

keep it up

thanx dear
mujhy app logoon ke guidness ke
bohat zarorat hay main yhaan tk tum logoon
ke wjah say pohanchi hoon bs isi trhaan say
mujhy meri ghalteaan bhi btaty jana taan k main
unhain dor kr sakoon or mazeed achi poetry kr sakoonn:rose
thanx once again:phool:
b happy:rose

[jia]

Re: *Izhaar na krna aya*

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
main nay abhi PM dekha..........
buht khobsorat liakha hai Jia....aisay hi likhtay rehain...ALLAH TALAA aap ko khush rakhay

tareef tu ahsaas ko karni aati hai.......

thanx alot dear:rose
thanx 4 ur best wishess:phool:
b happy:rose

[tabish]

Re: *Izhaar na krna aya*

izhaar na krna aya

jia jee bhoat hi aachha hi

[zmufti]

Re: *Izhaar na krna aya*

Jia saheba
aik achchi koshish ke liye daad qabool kijye
ghazal meN jazbaat ke saath ilfaaz ki bhee rawaani hai
gar ijazat ho to kuch technical baatieN arz kar duuN

aap ne apni ghazal meN jo qawafi istemaal kiyye heN vo heN

izhar, piyar, iqrar, deedaar, bezaar, ikhtiaar shumaar,inkaar, aah-o-zaar, dildaar, talabgaar , baar, yaadgaar

in meN izhar,iqrar,bezar,inkaar,dildaar, har baar ham qaafia heN

jabk shumaar aur piyar ham qafia heN

ikhtiar ke ham qaafia ilfaaz yaadgaar, intzaar aur beqrar

aah-o-zaar sahih lafz nahiN hai
aah-o-zaari durust hai

aap ke har sher ka doosra misra youN hai

hamieN..........na karna aaya

to blank per aisa hi lafz aa sakta hai jo pehlay ka hamwazn ho

filhaal itna hi
regards
zmufti

[baqarkashmiri]

Re: *Izhaar na krna aya*

Jia Kiya waqee he tum...so sweet dear