*Tujhy kia milly ga aakhir*

[jia]

:rose

[refreshing_breeze]

Re: *Tujhy kia milly ga aakhir*

wah jia jaani :clap:
poetry bohat hi khubsoorat hai hamesha ki tarha :rose
bas wording mein proper spacing ki problem hai

keep sharing

[jia]

Re: *Tujhy kia milly ga aakhir*

ok dear thanx 4 like this
yeh ghalti bhi door ho he jay ge:insha:
b happy:rose

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: *Tujhy kia milly ga aakhir*

wah g wah ..masha'Allah...ki poetry ki hai...!
very nice..keep sharing

[Nadeem_khan]

Re: *Tujhy kia milly ga aakhir*

nice one ji

[*Rida*]

Re: *Tujhy kia milly ga aakhir*

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
thought achi...hai....

keep it up:phool:

[jia]

Re: *Tujhy kia milly ga aakhir*

thanx 2 all of u
b happy:rose

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: *Tujhy kia milly ga aakhir*

Waaaaah bahooot khooob

[A.h.khan]

Re: *Tujhy kia milly ga aakhir*

achi gazal hae magar mokamal nahi hae darmiyan main kahin rhe gai hae bat pori nahi ho saki ap ki gazal ki radif ko mokamal karin to bahot achi gazal hae;;;;

zindagi ki talash main nikle to hain magar;;;;
dekhye kis ko kiya deti hae zindagi;;;;
ye to nahi ke raha main rok jati hae zindagi;;;;
magar ek kasak de jati hae zindagi;;;;
sonchin to bahot assan hae zindagi;;;;
guzarne baythin to sadiyan bit jati hain;;;;
aek an kahi khani jis ko khte hain mohabat;;;;
talab ban gai hae aek molakat ke bad;;;;
roz khe dete hain dost aj teri molakat ho jaye gi us se;;;
isi aas pe guzar de pori zindagi hum ne;;;;a.h.k

mujhe ziyda likhna nahi ata is liye jomlon ke hair phir ko nazar andaz kar dijye ga:rosethnkxxxxxxx

[jia]

Re: *Tujhy kia milly ga aakhir*

Thanx alot dear frends
b happy:rose

[jia]

Re: *Tujhy kia milly ga aakhir*

achi gazal hae magar mokamal nahi hae darmiyan main kahin rhe gai hae bat pori nahi ho saki ap ki gazal ki radif ko mokamal karin to bahot achi gazal hae;;;;

zindagi ki talash main nikle to hain magar;;;;
dekhye kis ko kiya deti hae zindagi;;;;
ye to nahi ke raha main rok jati hae zindagi;;;;
magar ek kasak de jati hae zindagi;;;;
sonchin to bahot assan hae zindagi;;;;
guzarne baythin to sadiyan bit jati hain;;;;
aek an kahi khani jis ko khte hain mohabat;;;;
talab ban gai hae aek molakat ke bad;;;;
roz khe dete hain dost aj teri molakat ho jaye gi us se;;;
isi aas pe guzar de pori zindagi hum ne;;;;a.h.k

mujhe ziyda likhna nahi ata is liye jomlon ke hair phir ko nazar andaz kar dijye ga:rosethnkxxxxxxx

Mujhy app ke baat ke kuch samajh nahi i
app nay jo ghazal likhi hay us main meri ghazal say related kuch nahi hay...zra phir say samjha dain gay plz:)

[A.h.khan]

Re: *Tujhy kia milly ga aakhir*

jia sory ke ap ki samjh main meri bat nahi ayee darassal sirf zindagi ki haqiqat ki bat kar rha tha main is main jo ke ap mujh se ziyada janti hain or samjhti hain mera ap ko kisi kisim ki nasihat ya tankeed har giz nahi hae agar ap ko koi bat bori lagi to i m sory bas ap ki gazal phar ke ehsas howa ke ap ko zindagi se sikayat hae is liye bas or koi maqsad nahi hae

[Nadeem_khan]

Re: *Tujhy kia milly ga aakhir*

nice very nice ,,,
bas karain nahi to main ro dooon ga ab ..........
maira dil zara chota hai janab.........