*Kaheen teri manind main bhi*

[jia]

:rose

[aquari]

Re: *Kaheen teri manind main bhi*

"kahi is gham kolekr hi ghamzada na hojaoo"
nice jia

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: *Kaheen teri manind main bhi*

oooOOOyee ..buhat achi poetry ki hai aaap nay...!:thmbup:
keep it up...!:rose

aik tip...: wazan rakha kerain thora sa...shairon kay darmiyaan...!
on the whole...good attempt..keep sharing

[*Rida*]

Re: *Kaheen teri manind main bhi*

Assalam-0-Alaikom:rose

nice written Jia.....keep it up...:rose

[jia]

Re: *Kaheen teri manind main bhi*

thanx alot dear frends
b happy:rose

[jia]

Re: *Kaheen teri manind main bhi*

oooOOOyee ..buhat achi poetry ki hai aaap nay...!:thmbup:
keep it up...!:rose

aik tip...: wazan rakha kerain thora sa...shairon kay darmiyaan...!
on the whole...good attempt..keep sharing

app nay jo tip de hay next time main mazeed koshish say yeh kaam bhi zaror karoon ge lakin mainy to apni trf asy bohat koshish ke k wazan thek he rahy or mujhy theek bhi lga:).......wel next time khiyal rakhoon ge:lpop:
thanx alot:)
b happy:rose

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: *Kaheen teri manind main bhi*

bahoot he umda gazal

[A.h.khan]

Re: *Kaheen teri manind main bhi*

sahir ludhyanivi ne kha tha ke;;;;;


taruf rog ban jaye to us ka bholna bhetar;;;;
talouq bojh ban jaye to us ka torna bhetar;;;;
who afssana jisye anjam tak lana namomkin na ho;;;;
use ek khobsorat mor de kar chorna bhetar;;;;;;

[Nadeem_khan]

Re: *Kaheen teri manind main bhi*

wah bohat achey ,,,,very nice

[Rameez]

Re: *Kaheen teri manind main bhi*

goooodddd ..piaraaa likhaa haaii ..hameeshaa ki terrhaa:rose

[Rai]

Re: *Kaheen teri manind main bhi*

bohat hi acha likha ha.very nice

[Nadeem_khan]

Re: *Kaheen teri manind main bhi*

very nice,,or Allah na karey k ap aysi hon....