~!*ghazal*!~

[jia]

:rose

[aquari]

Re: ~!*ghazal*!~

jia ..koshish tu bauht achi haii
shairi k usoolo ko appney kitna follow kya hai yeh tu koi ustad ya mahir hi bata paye ga
mager i must say bauht cute si hai ap ki trhaa :phool:

[refreshing_breeze]

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aha
poetry hamesha ki tarha bohat khubsoorat hai:rose
kuch words ko sahi nahi likha hua hai
phir text ki alignment aur proper spacing ko attention ki zaroorat hai
kaise karna hai wo aap ko bata diya hai:comfort:
mujhe ummid hai next time aap ka kaam aur bhi acha hoga:thmbup:
anyways
inpage mein first try ke liye very good jee:clap:
keep it up
we all will guide u :insha:

[jia]

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jia ..koshish tu bauht achi haii
shairi k usoolo ko appney kitna follow kya hai yeh tu koi ustad ya mahir hi bata paye ga
mager i must say bauht cute si hai ap ki trhaa :phool:

thanx alot dear:phool:
ab agr ustad yaan mahir btany baithy to is main say
najany kia kia ghaltian miklain geeenn:khi:
mere trhaan cute hay to phir achi baat hay:hehe:
thank u so much:rose

[jia]

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aha
poetry hamesha ki tarha bohat khubsoorat hai:rose
kuch words ko sahi nahi likha hua hai
phir text ki alignment aur proper spacing ko attention ki zaroorat hai
kaise karna hai wo aap ko bata diya hai:comfort:
mujhe ummid hai next time aap ka kaam aur bhi acha hoga:thmbup:
anyways
inpage mein first try ke liye very good jee:clap:
keep it up
we all will guide u :insha:

thanx k app nay mujhy aisy comments diay hain jin say mujhy kafi kuch seekhny ko milla hay..........next time i'll b care full:)
....jo kuch app nay btaya hay main usay follow karoon ge or next time aisi ghalti nahi ho ge
thanx alot once again.....agr app log mujhy guide krty rahy to main :insha: jald he theek ho jaoon ge:lpop:
b happy:rose

[Mujahid Khan]

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wah jia sister maashaalaah aap ki shaairy bhi roz baroz nikhhar rahi hai,bohot he khoobsoorat andaaz may khiyaalat ko lafzon may dhaala hai.
bilkul parfactthmbup:

[jia]

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wah jia sister maashaalaah aap ki shaairy bhi roz baroz nikhhar rahi hai,bohot he khoobsoorat andaaz may khiyaalat ko lafzon may dhaala hai.
bilkul parfactthmbup:

thank u so much brother:rose
app ki hoslaa afzai ka bohat bohat shukria:)
b happy:rose

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

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REALLY IMPRESSIVE....!:thmbup:
KEEP IT UP....!

[jia]

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thanx for like this
b happy:rose

[Nadeem_khan]

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nice

[jia]

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thanx alot
b happy:rose

[WASI ANJUM]

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bahoot khoob
nice one

[jia]

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Thanx alot WASI g
b happy:rose

[A.h.khan]

Re: ~!*ghazal*!~

ap ki ye gazal waqye bahot achi hae sirf kuch lin oper niche kar dain to bahot achi ho jaye gi jayse akhri ki lin ko darmiyan main hona chye tha kion ke jo ap khena chati hain who mix ho gaya hae main koi nakad nahi hon magar jo meri samjh main aya who main ne likh diya hae

[Nadeem_khan]

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very nice jia