***aisa kion krty hoo? ***

[jia]

kabhi inkar krty hoo kabhi iqrar krty ho
mujhy ik baar btlao kia mujh say piyar krty ho?

tera hr baat ko yoon he namukalmal sa chod daina
kia meri trhaan hr kisi ko tum bayzaar krty ho?

hr baar tera anaa or yoon he chally jana
kion hr baar tum waaddy hzaar krty ho?

mujhy hr pal ke trp day kr nzran chorana tera
kion baywajah meri jaan bayqrara krty ho?

hr baar waadda krty ho hr baar bhool jaty ho
kion yehi amaal mery saath hr baar krty ho?

ik baar dil jo toty jorta nahi kabhi bhi
kion phir mery dil k tokry bar bar krty ho?

tere yadoon main gom rehny ke szaa pai hay
kion hr baar mujhy jhotla kr zaro zaar krty ho?

is dil pay apny sitam ab khatm kr do jan-a-jaan
kion is dil sitam tum bayshumaar krty ho?

[ahsaas]

Re: ***aisa kion krty hoo? ***

buhat umdah Wording ..Ji@ buhat Khobsurat poetry ki hai aap ney
keep it up...:thmbup::phool:

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: ***aisa kion krty hoo? ***

"kabhi inkar krty hoo kabhi iqrar krty ho
mujhy ik baar btlao kia mujh say piyar krty ho?"kia kehnay...!wah wah

jia buhat dard bhari poetry...hai...buhat pasand aie..!

[refreshing_breeze]

Re: ***aisa kion krty hoo? ***

bohat khubsoorat likha hai aap ney jia jaani:rose
keep it up :em:

[jia]

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thank u so much dearzzzzz:eye:
b happy:rose

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ***aisa kion krty hoo? ***

bahoot khoob surat gazal jia

[Gul]

Re: ***aisa kion krty hoo? ***

kabhi inkar krty hoo kabhi iqrar krty ho
mujhy ik baar btlao kia mujh say piyar krty ho?

tera hr baat ko yoon he namukalmal sa chod daina
kia meri trhaan hr kisi ko tum bayzaar krty ho?

hr baar tera anaa or yoon he chally jana
kion hr baar tum waaddy hzaar krty ho?

mujhy hr pal ke trp day kr nzran chorana tera
kion baywajah meri jaan bayqrara krty ho?

hr baar waadda krty ho hr baar bhool jaty ho
kion yehi amaal mery saath hr baar krty ho?

ik baar dil jo toty jorta nahi kabhi bhi
kion phir mery dil k tokry bar bar krty ho?

tere yadoon main gom rehny ke szaa pai hay
kion hr baar mujhy jhotla kr zaro zaar krty ho?

is dil pay apny sitam ab khatm kr do jan-a-jaan
kion is dil sitam tum bayshumaar krty ho?

Ghazal ka radeef Qafia ..suna sunaa sa hai ...
Magar Jia jee aap K sher ap ka apna ehsaas hein ..
Kuch ..RAwani ki kami hai ....

Just last sher jaisay ...
Iss DIL pey apnay sitam ab khatm kar do jan-e Jaan..Ki jagha
agar
Iss DIL per apnay sitam ab kam kar do jaanaN
Kion hum pey youn VAAR baar baar kartay ho..
Iss mein kuch rawani nahi ??:) anyway ....aap K pass feelings hein ..DO keep On Writing ..Thanx for sharing...anyway :) Khush rahiyay...:rose

[Rameez]

Re: ***aisa kion krty hoo? ***

boohaat niceee haaaaaaaaa...:rose

[Yaaram]

Re: ***aisa kion krty hoo? ***

Bohat khooB Jia - Aik aik lafz, Misra, Sher Bohat hi aala - Aisa lag raha hay ke aik hi lari main prioye hoe phool hoN - Bohat napi tuli Ghazal kahi hay.

[Ali jee]

Re: ***aisa kion krty hoo? ***

nice jia jeee

kabhi inkar krty hoo kabhi iqrar krty ho
mujhy ik baar btlao kia mujh say piyar krty ho?

tera hr baat ko yoon he namukalmal sa chod daina
kia meri trhaan hr kisi ko tum bayzaar krty ho?

hr baar tera anaa or yoon he chally jana
kion hr baar tum waaddy hzaar krty ho?

mujhy hr pal ke trp day kr nzran chorana tera
kion baywajah meri jaan bayqrara krty ho?

hr baar waadda krty ho hr baar bhool jaty ho
kion yehi amaal mery saath hr baar krty ho?

ik baar dil jo toty jorta nahi kabhi bhi
kion phir mery dil k tokry bar bar krty ho?

tere yadoon main gom rehny ke szaa pai hay
kion hr baar mujhy jhotla kr zaro zaar krty ho?

is dil pay apny sitam ab khatm kr do jan-a-jaan
kion is dil sitam tum bayshumaar krty ho?

[J.KHAN]

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Bahoot khoob surat gazal jia

[Roshan-ali]

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jia u wonderful writer.....u write niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
take it uppppppppppppppppppppp

[*Hijab*]

Re: ***aisa kion krty hoo? ***

nice one dear