*~*~*Tere Yaad*~*~*

[jia]

yeh thandi hawa mujh ko sta rahi hay
hr pal mujh ko teri yaad dilla rahi hay

bhary asmaan pr jab chand hay akaila
kion chandani phir meri hansi ura rahi hay

kaisy bholaon tujh ko too hi bta day mujh ko
mujh ko meri hr saans tujh say milla rahi hay

main tnha zaror hoon mgr preshan bhi hoon
yoon lagy teri tnhai mujh ko bola rahi hay

yeh thandi hawa mujh ko staa rahi hay
hr pal mujh ko teri yaad dilla rahi hay
:rose :rose :rose

[*Hala*]

Re: *~*~*Tere Yaad*~*~*

arey waha.. app be buht achi shairy lekhti hai... :thmbup:
buht acha lekha hai.... be happy:phool:

[*Hijab*]

Re: *~*~*Tere Yaad*~*~*

wow.....very nice poetry jia jee............keep it up!

[jia]

Re: *~*~*Tere Yaad*~*~*

thanx alot dear frends
b happy

[Nadeem_khan]

Re: *~*~*Tere Yaad*~*~*

wah wah wah ,,ary lagta hai k 1 din ap bohat bari shayera bany gi..to is dost ko mat bhooliye ga,,,nice poetrey

[jia]

Re: *~*~*Tere Yaad*~*~*

wah wah wah ,,ary lagta hai k 1 din ap bohat bari shayera bany gi..to is dost ko mat bhooliye ga,,,nice poetrey

nahi janab abhi main is qabil nahi hoe hoon:shh:
lakin koshish yehi hay k:insha: poet bnjaoon ge
app logon ko main kaisy bhool skti hoon:lpop:
mujhy poet bna nay main app sab ki Dua jo hay:)
b happy:rose

[Nadeem_khan]

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:rose :rose ary nahi janab yeh hamari duyain to zaroor hain laiken is main ap ki mahnat bhi to shamil hai na,,,,,,keep it up:thmbup: :thmbup:

[jia]

Re: *~*~*Tere Yaad*~*~*

ok dear thanx alot

[shahid_naman]

Re: *~*~*Tere Yaad*~*~*

yeh thandi hawa mujh ko sta rahi hay
hr pal mujh ko teri yaad dilla rahi hay

bhary asmaan pr jab chand hay akaila
kion chandani phir meri hansi ura rahi hay

kaisy bholaon tujh ko too hi bta day mujh ko
mujh ko meri hr saans tujh say milla rahi hay

main tnha zaror hoon mgr preshan bhi hoon
yoon lagy teri tnhai mujh ko bola rahi hay

yeh thandi hawa mujh ko staa rahi hay
hr pal mujh ko teri yaad dilla rahi hay
:rose :rose :rose

:thmbup::thmbup: