Tum na jany kis soch main gom ho(My Own)

[jia]

:rosetum najany kis soch main gom ho:rose
meri soch main tum ho
meri yadoon main tum ho
pr tum najany kis soch main gom ho
tumhain nigah-e-yaar say
dakhti hoon or sochti hoon
meri duniya to tum ho
phir tum kis duniya main gom ho
main jis pl say jis mnzar say
lootf andoz hona chahti hoon
woh pl woh mnzar tum ho
pr tum najany kis mnazr main gom ho
is duniya ke rangeneon say
waqf na the, tum nay krwaya
mujhyinr angenion main bhola kr
tum najany kin rangenion main gom ho
tum nay he mujhy
khwab dekhna sikhaya tha
ab main wadi-e-khwab main hoon
pr tum najany kin wadioon main gom ho
main haseen chahron ke
tlab gar na the
main montzir hoon teri
mujhy teri talab hay
pr tum na jany kis ke tlab main gom ho
ajj tnha baith kr
socha to yeh ahssaas hoa
mary hr ahssas main hr saans main tum ho
pr tum najany kis ke sansoon main gom ho
tum ay or mujhy jaan bna kr
meri jaan lay kr chaly gay
ab yeh to btao meri jaan khan gom hay:rose :rose
meri khwabon main
mery khiyaloon main
meri duneiya main tum ho
aik baar bta do tum kahan gom ho:rose :rose :rose

[Gul]

Re: Tum na jany kis soch main gom ho(My Own)

Nice attempt ....Jia jee Aap Ki yeh nazam Achi lagi :) Khawhishoun marnay mut dijay gaa :)

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Tum na jany kis soch main gom ho(My Own)

hummmmmmmmmmmm...aik chez kee samaj nahi ai???

jaisy aap sochty hu ..waisa hee kisi kee bee apni khwahish huti hay...
aur jaisa aap kisi k bary main sochty hu to pher kiun os sy es bary main ray kaaim ker daity hu k wo bee aap hee k bary main sochy
jaisa aap os k bary main sochty hu os ka bee hak hay k kisi aur k bary main sochy........................yeh kaisi philosphy hay.....???

[jia]

Re: Tum na jany kis soch main gom ho(My Own)

hummmmmmmmmmmm...aik chez kee samaj nahi ai???

jaisy aap sochty hu ..waisa hee kisi kee bee apni khwahish huti hay...
aur jaisa aap kisi k bary main sochty hu to pher kiun os sy es bary main ray kaaim ker daity hu k wo bee aap hee k bary main sochy
jaisa aap os k bary main sochty hu os ka bee hak hay k kisi aur k bary main sochy........................yeh kaisi philosphy hay.....???

yes u r rite
hr kisi ki apni khwahis hoti hay
isi trhaan meri bhi hain lakin lakin lakin
main yeh nahi chahti k woh apni khwahishat ko
marr ke meri poori kary bl k main to chahti hoon
k meri khwahishat dakh kr us ko pta chaly k
us k baad kia kia khwahishat hain:rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose

[shahid_naman]

Re: Tum na jany kis soch main gom ho(My Own)

:rosetum najany kis soch main gom ho:rose
meri soch main tum ho
meri yadoon main tum ho
pr tum najany kis soch main gom ho
tumhain nigah-e-yaar say
dakhti hoon or sochti hoon
meri duniya to tum ho
phir tum kis duniya main gom ho
main jis pl say jis mnzar say
lootf andoz hona chahti hoon
woh pl woh mnzar tum ho
pr tum najany kis mnazr main gom ho
is duniya ke rangeneon say
waqf na the, tum nay krwaya
mujhyinr angenion main bhola kr
tum najany kin rangenion main gom ho
tum nay he mujhy
khwab dekhna sikhaya tha
ab main wadi-e-khwab main hoon
pr tum najany kin wadioon main gom ho
main haseen chahron ke
tlab gar na the
main montzir hoon teri
mujhy teri talab hay
pr tum na jany kis ke tlab main gom ho
ajj tnha baith kr
socha to yeh ahssaas hoa
mary hr ahssas main hr saans main tum ho
pr tum najany kis ke sansoon main gom ho
tum ay or mujhy jaan bna kr
meri jaan lay kr chaly gay
ab yeh to btao meri jaan khan gom hay:rose :rose
meri khwabon main
mery khiyaloon main
meri duneiya main tum ho
aik baar bta do tum kahan gom ho:rose :rose :rose

:phool::phool:

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Tum na jany kis soch main gom ho(My Own)

nice jia
her kisi ko apni khawaish zahir karne ka haq hai chahe woh poori hi ya na ho

[Rameez]

Re: Tum na jany kis soch main gom ho(My Own)

jiaa ...u rr 2 gooooooooooooooood :rose