Aankh or samnder(my own)

[jia]

yeh mainy khud likha hay
pta nahi kaisa ho ga lakin
main yeh nahi kahoon ge k
brdasht kr laina mujhy koi ghlti
ho to bta bhi daina plz mujhy
handle krna app ka kamm ho ga
so plz mzaq mt urana ok nahi to:embarasse

aankh or samnder main koi frq nahi hota
jistrhaan samnder gahra hota hay
isi trhaan ankhoon main bhi
boaht gahrai hoti hai
jistrhaan koi insan samnder main doob jay
to us ka bchna mushkil hota hay
isi trhaan jab kisi ki ankhon main doob jao
to bhi bchna mumkin hota hay lakin
koi bchna nahi chahta
jistrhaan bin btay
samnder main toofan aa jata hay
isi trhaan ankh ka aansoo bhi
bin bulay mehman ke trhaan hota hay
kisi bhi wqt aa jata hay
khushi ho yaan ghm ho
jistrhaan samnder main dheroon
kashtian hoti hain jahaz hoty hain
isi trhaan ankh main
hzaroon khwab hoty hain
jistrhaan un ka sufer haseen hota hay
isi trhaan khwaboon ka sufer
bhi haseen he hota hay
jistrhaan samnder main toofan
bohat sari tbahi ka bayes hoty hain
isi trhaan jab khwab toottay hain
to woh bhi kuch aisa he mnzr
biyan krty hain
jistrhaan samnder ka panni
namkeen hot hay
isi trhaan ankh ka ansoo bhi
namken hota hay
jistrhan samnder main
qeemti moti hoty hain
isi trhaan ankh ka ansoo hay
agr na smjho to
namke pani ka qtra hay or
agr samjho to
un motion say bhi ziyada anmol hain
jistrhaan samnder k kinary
apiss main nahi mill skty
isi trhaan donoon ankhain
bhi apiss main nahi mill skteen
jistrhaan samnder ke lehar
sahil ko choay bghair nahi reh skti
isi trhaan ankh ka ansoo
gaal ko choay bghair nahi reh skta

[Z.]

Re: Aankh or samnder(my own)

wah!

acha likha hai :thmbup:

[jia]

Re: Aankh or samnder(my own)

thanx alot its my 1st time
main bohat ciofused bhi hoe lakin
phir bhi mainy likh diya:rose
:rosethank u so much:rose

[Z.]

Re: Aankh or samnder(my own)

thanx alot its my 1st time
main bohat ciofused bhi hoe lakin
phir bhi mainy likh diya:rose
:rosethank u so much:rose

yw!

likhti raho aur khush raho :thmbup:

[NaQsh]

Re: Aankh or samnder(my own)

wah bohat hee umda first time hai to kia huwa
kaheen na kaheen se to shruwat hoti hai oarhkar dil bohat khush huwa chanda

khush raho aur likhtee raho

[jia]

Re: Aankh or samnder(my own)

wah bohat hee umda first time hai to kia huwa
kaheen na kaheen se to shruwat hoti hai oarhkar dil bohat khush huwa chanda

khush raho aur likhtee raho

thakx alot dear friends
bs app logoon ke dua hay jo mainy
yeh sb krny ke koshish ke hay
:rose thank u:rose

[shahid_naman]

Re: Aankh or samnder(my own)

yeh mainy khud likha hay
pta nahi kaisa ho ga lakin
main yeh nahi kahoon ge k
brdasht kr laina mujhy koi ghlti
ho to bta bhi daina plz mujhy
handle krna app ka kamm ho ga
so plz mzaq mt urana ok nahi to:embarasse

aankh or samnder main koi frq nahi hota
jistrhaan samnder gahra hota hay
isi trhaan ankhoon main bhi
boaht gahrai hoti hai
jistrhaan koi insan samnder main doob jay
to us ka bchna mushkil hota hay
isi trhaan jab kisi ki ankhon main doob jao
to bhi bchna mumkin hota hay lakin
koi bchna nahi chahta
jistrhaan bin btay
samnder main toofan aa jata hay
isi trhaan ankh ka aansoo bhi
bin bulay mehman ke trhaan hota hay
kisi bhi wqt aa jata hay
khushi ho yaan ghm ho
jistrhaan samnder main dheroon
kashtian hoti hain jahaz hoty hain
isi trhaan ankh main
hzaroon khwab hoty hain
jistrhaan un ka sufer haseen hota hay
isi trhaan khwaboon ka sufer
bhi haseen he hota hay
jistrhaan samnder main toofan
bohat sari tbahi ka bayes hoty hain
isi trhaan jab khwab toottay hain
to woh bhi kuch aisa he mnzr
biyan krty hain
jistrhaan samnder ka panni
namkeen hot hay
isi trhaan ankh ka ansoo bhi
namken hota hay
jistrhan samnder main
qeemti moti hoty hain
isi trhaan ankh ka ansoo hay
agr na smjho to
namke pani ka qtra hay or
agr samjho to
un motion say bhi ziyada anmol hain
jistrhaan samnder k kinary
apiss main nahi mill skty
isi trhaan donoon ankhain
bhi apiss main nahi mill skteen
jistrhaan samnder ke lehar
sahil ko choay bghair nahi reh skti
isi trhaan ankh ka ansoo
gaal ko choay bghair nahi reh skta

rose:rose

[justqamar1]

Re: Aankh or samnder(my own)

:SubhanAllhaa:

[justqamar1]

Re: Aankh or samnder(my own)

KEEP IT LOCK
(Aik Mukammal Tareen DUA 4 u)


ِسْمِ اللَّهِ الرَّحْمَنِ الرَّحِيمِ
In the name of Allah, Most Gracious, Most Merciful.

الْحَمْدُ لِلَّهِ رَبِّ الْعَالَمِينَ
Praise be to Allah, the Cherisher and Sustainer of the worlds;

الرَّحْمَنِ الرَّحِيمِ
Most Gracious, Most Merciful;

مَالِكِ يَوْمِ الدِّينِ
Master of the Day of Judgment.

إِيَّاكَ نَعْبُدُ وَإِيَّاكَ نَسْتَعِينُ
Thee do we worship, and Thine aid we seek.

اهْدِنَا الصِّرَاطَ الْمُسْتَقِيمَ
the straight way,

صِرَاطَ الَّذِينَ أَنْعَمْتَ عَلَيْهِمْ غَيْرِ الْمَغْضُوبِ عَلَيْهِمْ وَلا الضَّالِّينَ
The way of those on whom Thou hast bestowed Thy Grace, those whose (portion) is not
wrath, and who go not astray.
AAMEEN
nwys tc nuff lv ma lv 4 u 2day as u ..lolz

[Raniya Asif]

Re: Aankh or samnder(my own)

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Aankh or samnder(my own)

aap ne aankh aur samandar ki similirity ko achhay andaz mein bayan kiya
bahooot he zabardast andaz mein
very nice

[A.h.khan]

Re: Aankh or samnder(my own)

bahot acha likha hae
tumhare ehsasat tumhare jazbat sab ke sab lagta hae kisi ki talash main sar grdan hain,

[Shakh-e-Tamana]

Re: Aankh or samnder(my own)

zaberdast:x :x nice thoughts jano:*..

[Gul]

Re: Aankh or samnder(my own)

yeh mainy khud likha hay
pta nahi kaisa ho ga lakin
main yeh nahi kahoon ge k
brdasht kr laina mujhy koi ghlti
ho to bta bhi daina plz mujhy
handle krna app ka kamm ho ga
so plz mzaq mt urana ok nahi to:embarasse

aankh or samnder main koi frq nahi hota
jistrhaan samnder gahra hota hay
isi trhaan ankhoon main bhi
boaht gahrai hoti hai
jistrhaan koi insan samnder main doob jay
to us ka bchna mushkil hota hay
isi trhaan jab kisi ki ankhon main doob jao
to bhi bchna mumkin hota hay lakin
koi bchna nahi chahta
jistrhaan bin btay
samnder main toofan aa jata hay
isi trhaan ankh ka aansoo bhi
bin bulay mehman ke trhaan hota hay
kisi bhi wqt aa jata hay
khushi ho yaan ghm ho
jistrhaan samnder main dheroon
kashtian hoti hain jahaz hoty hain
isi trhaan ankh main
hzaroon khwab hoty hain
jistrhaan un ka sufer haseen hota hay
isi trhaan khwaboon ka sufer
bhi haseen he hota hay
jistrhaan samnder main toofan
bohat sari tbahi ka bayes hoty hain
isi trhaan jab khwab toottay hain
to woh bhi kuch aisa he mnzr
biyan krty hain
jistrhaan samnder ka panni
namkeen hot hay
isi trhaan ankh ka ansoo bhi
namken hota hay
jistrhan samnder main
qeemti moti hoty hain
isi trhaan ankh ka ansoo hay
agr na smjho to
namke pani ka qtra hay or
agr samjho to
un motion say bhi ziyada anmol hain
jistrhaan samnder k kinary
apiss main nahi mill skty
isi trhaan donoon ankhain
bhi apiss main nahi mill skteen
jistrhaan samnder ke lehar
sahil ko choay bghair nahi reh skti
isi trhaan ankh ka ansoo
gaal ko choay bghair nahi reh skta

Buhat achi tashbeeh hai aap ki .....

magar .....ANKH mein sakoot kahan jo Samandar mein ......

Samandar ka sakoot agar AAnkh paaa ley tu....

AANKH ......AANKH na rahay PATHAR ho ja-ay ......

anyway aap nay buhat achi tashbeehat dee .. WEllDOne..:phool:

[Nadeem_khan]

Re: Aankh or samnder(my own)

kia bat hai jee,,abhi pahla hi itna acha likha hai ,,to Inshallah agey bhi ap is se acha hi likhin ge,,,,nice