Aik Akeli Larki

[hayaa_n]

:rose Meirey ander

:rose Aik akeli larki roti rehti hay

:rose Jis'ka chehra hansta hay

:rose Jis ki aankhein bheegti hain

:rose Jo chup chup si rehti hay

:rose Man hi man main bolti hay

:rose Sab kay chehray khojti hay...

[~Aashoo~]

Re: Aik Akeli Larki

bohattt khoob,,,,,sab k chehray khojti hay,,, really nice:rose
thxx for shring:)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Aik Akeli Larki

bohattt khoob,,,,,sab k chehray khojti hay,,, really nice:rose
thxx for shring:)

Aashoo ji bouhat bouhat shukriya..khushi hui k nazm aap ko pasand aai...:)

[Yaaram]

Re: Aik Akeli Larki

Bohat umdah ...choti lekan khayal ke aitbar se bohat waseeh nazm :)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Aik Akeli Larki

Adnan ji aap nay hamaisha bouhat howsla barhaya hay.bouhat shukriya urdu composing ka aur itnay achay reply ka..:jazak: :)

[khan]

Re: Aik Akeli Larki

AOA,

Wah wah kia khoob kaha hai aap nain bohat masoom larki hai nazaam main bohat nokta hai bohat khoob :)


Sohail Abbasi.

[hayaa_n]

Re: Aik Akeli Larki

AOA,

Wah wah kia khoob kaha hai aap nain bohat masoom larki hai nazaam main bohat nokta hai bohat khoob :)


Sohail Abbasi.

W.salaam
:jazak: :) Khan ji kitnay umda alfaaz main aap nay howsla afzaai ki hi.bouhat khushi hui.khush rahiye.Aameen.

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: Aik Akeli Larki

Assalaam o alekum,


waaah bahooot khoob chhooti si koshish lekin bahoot dilkash daad qabool karien khush rahien aur khoob mehnat karien :)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Aik Akeli Larki

Assalaam o alekum,


waaah bahooot khoob chhooti si koshish lekin bahoot dilkash daad qabool karien khush rahien aur khoob mehnat karien :)

W.Salaam
:jazak: :) Bouhat Shukriya Khurram Ji,Itnay Howsla Afza Reply Ka..:insha: Koshish Jaari Rakhu'n Gi..Bouhat Shukriya.. :)

[*Hala*]

Re: Aik Akeli Larki

:clap: realy hayaa ji ur all poetry is toooo gooood .........:phool: Be happy :phool:

[hayaa_n]

Re: Aik Akeli Larki

:clap: realy hayaa ji ur all poetry is toooo gooood .........:phool: Be happy :phool:

:jazak: :) Hala ji aap kay sab replies say maira dil bouhat khush ho gaya....:masha kitna howsla barha diya hay aap nay Hala ji...bouhat shukriya...bouhat khush rahiye...:)