Saahil-e-Samandar say

[hayaa_n]

Asslamoalikum :rose

[Masood]

Re: Saahil-e-Samandar say

:rose Saahil-e-samandar say:rose :rose :rose
:rose Kuch lafz chun kay laai hun
:rose In lafzon main chupi
:rose Tumhari sargoshiyo'n ki
:rose Galay main maala hay peihni
:rose Saahil-e-samandar say:rose :rose :rose
:rose Hansi ki leihrain laai hun
:rose Is hansi main chupi
:rose Tumhari baato'n ki shuguftagi ki
:rose Kaan main baali hay peihni
:rose Saahil-e-samander say:rose :rose :rose
:rose Yaqee'n ki seepiya'n chunn kay laai hun
:rose In seepiyo'n main chupi
:rose Tumharay an-kahay lafzon ki tabeer say
:rose Main hun saji
:rose Is haar singhaar say saajan
:rose Tum ko keisi hun lagi??

Is masoom umer mein aisi tashbihaat bedharak dena aasan nahin, magar aap key khiyalaat khoob safar kartey hain Haya :) I wish keh meri umer itni draaz ho keh aap ka kalaam bohat saal tak parhney ko miley :rose Khush raho

[جنیداختر]

Re: Saahil-e-Samandar say

:rose Saahil-e-samandar say:rose :rose :rose
:rose Kuch lafz chun kay laai hun
:rose In lafzon main chupi
:rose Tumhari sargoshiyo'n ki
:rose Galay main maala hay peihni
:rose Saahil-e-samandar say:rose :rose :rose
:rose Hansi ki leihrain laai hun
:rose Is hansi main chupi
:rose Tumhari baato'n ki shuguftagi ki
:rose Kaan main baali hay peihni
:rose Saahil-e-samander say:rose :rose :rose
:rose Yaqee'n ki seepiya'n chunn kay laai hun
:rose In seepiyo'n main chupi
:rose Tumharay an-kahay lafzon ki tabeer say
:rose Main hun saji
:rose Is haar singhaar say saajan
:rose Tum ko keisi hun lagi??

wah kiya kalaam hai haya ...:)

[Rabi]

Re: Saahil-e-Samandar say

bohat hi umda hay bas ya samjh nahi ayi kay sahil-e-samnder lafz kaisy chuny/thinking

[hayaa_n]

Re: Saahil-e-Samandar say

Is masoom umer mein aisi tashbihaat bedharak dena aasan nahin, magar aap key khiyalaat khoob safar kartey hain Haya :) I wish keh meri umer itni draaz ho keh aap ka kalaam bohat saal tak parhney ko miley :rose Khush raho

Is howsla afzaai kay liye bouhat mashkoor hun.:jazak: :)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Saahil-e-Samandar say

wah kiya kalaam hai haya ...:)

Jums ji bouhat bouhat shukriya.:)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Saahil-e-Samandar say

bohat hi umda hay bas ya samjh nahi ayi kay sahil-e-samnder lafz kaisy chuny/thinking

Rabi bouhat shukriya kay aap ko yeh nazm pasand aai..saahil-e-samander say main jo kuch chun sakti thi chun liya hay.aap ko nahi bata rahi. :lol

[Yaaram]

Re: Saahil-e-Samandar say

Aik bohat ala aur jandar kawish...........be akhtyar si nazm .......jis ki har ramz ne mujhey apne aap se waqif kar dya hay :)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Saahil-e-Samandar say

Aik bohat ala aur jandar kawish...........be akhtyar si nazm .......jis ki har ramz ne mujhey apne aap se waqif kar dya hay :)

:jazak: :) Adnan ji bouhat shukar guzaar hun k aap is qadar busy hotay huway bhi maira likha sab Urdu main compose kartay hain..Bouhat shukriya.:)
Aap ko nazm pasand aai yeh jaan kar mujhay khushi hui.Bouhat shukriya.:)

[Enigmatic]

Re: Saahil-e-Samandar say

:masha :masha :rose :rose :rose :rose

[hayaa_n]

Re: Saahil-e-Samandar say

:masha :masha :rose :rose :rose :rose

:jazak: :rose Bouhat Shukriya Zee.:)