Raah-e-Wafa Mai'n Chaltay Chaltay

[hayaa_n]

Asslmaoalikum :rose

['SamRazi']

Re: Raah-e-Wafa Mai'n Chaltay Chaltay

Wah.... Haya......... buhut hi khoob likha hai :thmbup:


Hansi khushi ka jhoota roagh
Sab ko gaa ker sunaya hai


Khush rahi dear :phool:

[Yaaram]

Re: Raah-e-Wafa Mai'n Chaltay Chaltay

Aik aik lafz kamal likha hay khas kar
Jalti aankh kay angaaro'n ko

Aankho'n hi mai'n bujhaaya hay
Likhti rahye :rose
waslam

[Mehak]

Re: Raah-e-Wafa Mai'n Chaltay Chaltay

duniya ki is bheerr mein to ab...


bohat hi achha likha hai Hayaa_n... sab lafz dil mein utartey gaye :thmbup:

[hayaa_n]

Re: Raah-e-Wafa Mai'n Chaltay Chaltay

Wah.... Haya......... buhut hi khoob likha hai :thmbup:


Hansi khushi ka jhoota roagh
Sab ko gaa ker sunaya hai


Khush rahi dear :phool:

Saima ji,,aap ka reply read kar kay khushi hui kay aap ko mairi nazm pasand aai.Khush rahiye,bouhat shukriya is pazeeraai ka.:)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Raah-e-Wafa Mai'n Chaltay Chaltay

Aik aik lafz kamal likha hay khas kar
Jalti aankh kay angaaro'n ko

Aankho'n hi mai'n bujhaaya hay
Likhti rahye :rose
waslam

Yaaram ji bouhat shukriya kay aap nay mairi nazm ko Urdu mai'n compose kiya:) itnay umdaa shaair nay mairi nazm ki tareef ki hay to zaahir hay kay khushi hona fitri si baat hay,,,bouhat bouhat shukriya.:)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Raah-e-Wafa Mai'n Chaltay Chaltay

duniya ki is bheerr mein to ab...


bohat hi achha likha hai Hayaa_n... sab lafz dil mein utartey gaye :thmbup:

Assalam.o.aleikum,,Mehak ji aap k khoobsurat reply k liye mamnoon hun.khush rahiye.:)

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Raah-e-Wafa Mai'n Chaltay Chaltay

bauht hee khobsurat

[hayaa_n]

Re: Raah-e-Wafa Mai'n Chaltay Chaltay

khl ji aap ki howsla afzaai ka bouhat shukriya.Khush rahiye sada.:)

[samander]

Re: Raah-e-Wafa Mai'n Chaltay Chaltay

:cc: ACHCHI HAI MAGAR EIK SHER ACHCHA HAI AJNABI

[hayaa_n]

Re: Raah-e-Wafa Mai'n Chaltay Chaltay

Samandar ji itna soch kay reply likhna acha laga.kown sa shair acha laga? khush rahiye sada.:)