Dair Mai'n Jitni Dil Sanbhalta Tha

[hayaa_n]

Asslmaoalikum :rose

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: Dair Mai'n Jitni Dil Sanbhalta Tha

Assalaam o alekum,


waaah bahooot khooob bahoot hi umdeh aur zabardast ek baar phir aapkaa kalam perh ker yaad e maazi yaad aagayaa bahoot hi umdeh likhaa aapnien aayindaa bhi aapke kalam kaa intezaar rahegaa dili daad qabol karien khush rahien iss sher ke saath

Raat pichlay paiher ki baarish mai'n
Koi tanhaa udaas baitha tha

Mujh ko day'ta tha woh dilaasay khud
Chup'chupa kay udoo say milta tha
:rose

[hayaa_n]

Re: Dair Mai'n Jitni Dil Sanbhalta Tha

Assalam.o.aleikum.....Khurram Shaikh ji hamaisha ki tarah aap ka reply mairay liye bouhat khushi ka baa'is bana hay.aap nay mairay kalaam ko saraaha jis ka bouhat bouhat shukriya.Khush rahiye.:)

[Yaaram]

Re: Dair Mai'n Jitni Dil Sanbhalta Tha

Bohat umdah........zabardast..tareef karne ke lye alfaz nahi hain

[hayaa_n]

Re: Dair Mai'n Jitni Dil Sanbhalta Tha

Yaaram ji aap kay reply ko read kar kay bouhat khush hui.mai'n nay (Adit) kiya hay maybe ghalat likh gaai thi 1 lafz.aap khud itnay achay shaair hai'n aur mairi bouhat howsla afzaai aap nay ki hay jis kay liye khush bhi hu'n aur shukriya bhi dil say kaihti hu'n.Khush rahiye.:)

[Yaaram]

Re: Dair Mai'n Jitni Dil Sanbhalta Tha

Yaaram ji aap kay reply ko read kar kay bouhat khush hui.mai'n nay (Adit) kiya hay maybe ghalat likh gaai thi 1 lafz.aap khud itnay achay shaair hai'n aur mairi bouhat howsla afzaai aap nay ki hay jis kay liye khush bhi hu'n aur shukriya bhi dil say kaihti hu'n.Khush rahiye.:)

no thanx dear :)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Dair Mai'n Jitni Dil Sanbhalta Tha

Yaaram ji,,
Mujhay itna to pata hi hay kay aap loge forum mai'n bouhat busy hotay hai'n,us kay ba'wajood aap time nikaal kar mairay likhay huway ko Urdu mai'n compose kar daitay hai'n to bhala mai'n kis tarha shukriya adaa na karu'n? dil say shukar guzaar hu'n.khush rahiye.Aameen:)

[جنیداختر]

Re: Dair Mai'n Jitni Dil Sanbhalta Tha

wah kiya umda kalaam hai :)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Dair Mai'n Jitni Dil Sanbhalta Tha

Jums ji maira likha huwa pasand karnay ka bouhat shukriya.:)

[samander]

Re: Dair Mai'n Jitni Dil Sanbhalta Tha

Ye Bohat He Khoobsurat Hai Dil Say Likhi Hoi Udoo Kiya Hai.......ajnabi

[hayaa_n]

Re: Dair Mai'n Jitni Dil Sanbhalta Tha

Samandar ji jo kuch dil ki kaifiyat hoti hay us ko mind kisi na kisi ghazal ya nazm ki soorat day daita hay aur phir may us ko kaaghaz par pen ki madad say likh daiti hun.us k baad keyboard say type kar k forum par laga daiti hu'n.aap ko dil say likhi lagi?:)

"Adu" say muraad Adaawat rakhnay waalay ki hay.