Raaz Rahnay Say Tou Behter Hay k

[hayaa_n]

Asslmaoalikum :rose

[Masood]

Re: Raaz Rahnay Say Tou Behter Hay k

Phail ja phool ki khushbu ki tarha gulshan mai'n
Kown kaihta hay k tou ishq mai'n rus'wa ho'ja

Dosto'n k abhi kuch owr karam baaqi hai'n
Zakhm-e-dil aaj zaraa owr bhi gaihra ho'ja

:rose :rose
Bohat zabardast! Kya khoob soch ka izhaar kya dilkash andaz mein kiya hai hai Haya bohat achha laga. :clap: :clap: :clap:

[najma]

Re: Raaz Rahnay Say Tou Behter Hay k

Raaz raihnay say tou behter hay k afsha ho'ja
Tu qaya'mat hay tou aa saam'nay bar'pa ho'ja
:rose
Phail ja phool ki khushbu ki tarha gulshan mai'n
Kown kaihta hay k tou ishq mai'n rus'wa ho'ja
:rose
Dosto'n k abhi kuch owr karam baaqi hai'n
Zakhm-e-dil aaj zaraa owr bhi gaihra ho'ja
:rose
Bann na show'la tuj'hay rowshan hi agar hou'na hay
Shab ki taareeki mai'n tu din ka ujaa'la ho'ja
:rose
Deeda-e-namm say kahay kown kisi din tu bhi
Sookh jaa'ta hay jo garmi say woh sehraa ho'ja
:rose
Un'ki aankhai'n bhi mujhay daikh k namm ho ja'ain
Aey taqaza-e-wafa aaj tou poora ho'ja
:rose

Aey mairay ashk woh tu subha ka taara ho'ja
:rose

haya sahiba!
aapka poora kalaam bohat aahista aahista is behr meiN doob doob k baar baar paRha.har baar ek naya lutf raha.itnii rawaaN, itne khoobsoorat khayaalaat liye, apki ghazal bohat pasand aaee.
yaqeen hay keh aap isii taraha ham se apne ese hii khoob kalam share kartii raheNgii.
har she,r par dilii daad qubool farmaiyye
:rose

[hayaa_n]

Re: Raaz Rahnay Say Tou Behter Hay k

Assalam.o.alekum
Masood ji aur Najma ji aap k replies read kar k mujhay bouhat khushi hui.maazrat chati hun k aik misra ghalta likh gai thi jo abhi sahi kiya hay.mujhay afsos hay k mai'n aap sab ko abhi read nahi kar parahi aur na hi replies likh pa rahi hun.umeed hay k maazrat qubool karain gay.

[Deeda-e-namm say kahay kown kisi din tu bhi
Sookh jaa'ta hay jo garmi mai'n woh dari'ya ho'ja]

[Safiya]

Re: Raaz Rahnay Say Tou Behter Hay k

Aadaab

Kya aap vohi hayaa haiN, jo kabhi Urdustaan pe huvaa kartiN thiN, agar aap vohi haiN to shayad aapko humaara naam bhi yaad ho. Ghazal to kamaal ki likhi haiy aapne, matla kaafi asar-angez haiy, bohot zabardast. maqta bhi bohot khoob haiy, ashaar 2 aur 6 khaas taur pe pasand aayeN haiN. bohot hi pyaara likhtiN hain aap eyse hi sunaati rahiye....

Safiya

[handsome]

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[(( Dill_Lagi ))]

Re: Raaz Rahnay Say Tou Behter Hay k

Buhat khoooob :rose

[hayaa_n]

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Aadaab

Kya aap vohi hayaa haiN, jo kabhi Urdustaan pe huvaa kartiN thiN, agar aap vohi haiN to shayad aapko humaara naam bhi yaad ho. Ghazal to kamaal ki likhi haiy aapne, matla kaafi asar-angez haiy, bohot zabardast. maqta bhi bohot khoob haiy, ashaar 2 aur 6 khaas taur pe pasand aayeN haiN. bohot hi pyaara likhtiN hain aap eyse hi sunaati rahiye....

Safiya

Adaab Safiya ji:) Bouhat shukriya kay aap ko maira likha huwa pasand aaya hay.ji nahi'n mai'n nay kabhi Urdustan mai'n nahi'n likha laikin mukhtalif jagho'n pay likhti zaroor rahi hu'n laikin bouhat kam hi likh paati hu'n.
Aik martaba phir shukriya qubool kijiye.Khush rahiye.:)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Raaz Rahnay Say Tou Behter Hay k

Buhat khoooob :rose

Assalam.o.aleikum
Dill_Lagi Ji bouhat shukriya reply ka.Khushi hui kay aap ko maira likha pasand aaya.Khush rahiye.:)

[samander]

Re: Raaz Rahnay Say Tou Behter Hay k

:rose :rose :rose BOHAT KHOOBSURAT HAI DIL MEIN UTARNAY WALI KAHEIN KHO JANY WALI :rose :rose :rose

[hayaa_n]

Re: Raaz Rahnay Say Tou Behter Hay k

Samandar ji aap nay bouhat khoobsurat reply likha hay.khushi hui read kar kay.khush rahiye.:)