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    :rose
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  • #2
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    Missssssssssshtake in first Post :( :(
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    • #3
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      @Gul sister
      its really a beautiful poetry

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      • #4
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        :rose
        " Obstacles are what you see when you take your eyes off your goals "

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        • #5
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          Buhat umda sharing ........Gul sis :rose

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          • #6
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            Waaaaaah bahot he khoobsurat poem likhi hai aap ne Gul ji
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            • #7
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              zabardast Gul Dearo
              u can't gain RESPECT by choice nor by requesting it... it is earned through your words & actions."

              :pr:

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              • #8
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                Bohat khoob, pehli post main yeh guma hoa kay aap ASHKOON kehna cha rahi hain aur ALIF lagana bhool gayin hain, dosri main pata chala kay ALIF nahin WOW tha yaani SHIKWOO kehna tha.... go kay ASKHOON bhi bohat sahi fit horaha tha phir yaad aaya kay inn hasratoon bhari ankhoon main ANSOO tou hain hi nahin tou ASHK likhna sach nahin hoga :)

                Bohat hi khoobsurat nazm, chand lafz hi hain magar, dili jazbaat aur ehsaas ko paish karnay kay liye chand lafzoon ka sahara hi bohat hay, soch-o-samajh kay ghoRay bohat doooour tak douRnay lagtay hain aap kay chand alfaaz paRh kar, apni aisi hi khoobsurat tehreeron say mustafeed karti rahyeh, khush rahyeh
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                • #9
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                  Buth he khoob lajwab
                  I aM Not a complete Idiot......Some parts are Missing........

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                  • #10
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                    Nice :D:

                    Different colous me or bhi acha laga :hansi

                    Great chiips

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                    • #11
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                      very nice
                      Aao uss ~*Ajnabi*~Ko Yaad Karen.!!

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                      • #12
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                        Wah Kia Baat Hay
                        Bohat Khoob
                        Keep Sharing...
                        :sad Ak Jhoota Lafz Mohabbat Ka ..

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