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Agar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: Agar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ohhhhhh........Nice GUL ji bahoot achi likhe hai
sad kyooN???
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Re: Agar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hamesha ki tarah bahot khoobsurat Nazam
parh kar maza aagaya
bas yahi to dukh hota hai k
kaaash hamein koi samjh pata koi jaan pata
lajawab poetry Gulsigpic
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Re: Agar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
good hai gul
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AGer koi mujhko jaan jaata
Meri zaat ko pehchaan jaata
tou main youn ruswa nahi hota
Hazaaron main Tanha nahi hota
iss be reham zamaaney k hathon
kabhi youn thukraya nahi jaata
AGer koi mujhe jaan jaata
Mere dil ko pehchaan jata
tuo main bhi kisi ki aankh ka
Taara hota
kisi k dil ki Dharkan hota
kisi k jeeney ki waja hota
koi mujhe bhi yaad karta
koi mujhe bhi piyar karta
AGer mujhe koi jaan jata
Mere jazbaat ko pehchan jata
tou meri ankhain bhi numm nahi hotin
meri khushiyan kabhi kum nahi hotin
meri muskaan youn dard main zam nahi hoti
meri zindgi ki shamaa youn madham nahi hoti
Kasha koi mujhe jaan jaata
Kash mujhe koi pehchaan jata
tou main kuch din or jee letaaaa
kash...
Gul ji maaf kijiye ga main ney aapki poem ka satiyanaas kar diya. lakin aapki poetry read kar k mujhe humesha he kuch feel hota hai. yaqeen maanain main iss site per sirf aap ki poetry k liye aata hon. aapki poetry main mujhe meri zaat mera maazi mera naseeb jaltaa hua dikhayee deta hai phir pata nahi kion ajeeb sa dard hota hai.
buhat acha likhti hain aap
plz humesha yonhi likhti rahiye ga. koi muntazir rehta hai read karney ko
jeeti rahiye
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khoob
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