so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

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Re: so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

Gul buhat acha likha hai aap nay :thmbup: :rose
Tanha ji main aap ki poetry alag thread main move kar diti houn :rose

[T@nh@ Mus@fir]

Re: so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

Gul ji and Anchal ji thank you very much. aap kitni achi hain kasam say. iss Eid per na aapko apni jaib say kulfi khilaon ga

[kemu]

Re: so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

bohat achay

[T@nh@ Mus@fir]

Re: so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

arey yea tu pehley main ney read ki hoi hai. hehehehehe

[Gul]

Re: so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

:)

[T@nh@ Mus@fir]

Re: so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

aapki poetry main aik or mazey ki baat hoti hai k aap apni poetry ko design kar k likhti hain or bhi piyari ho jati hai

[*Hijab*]

Re: so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

wah

[muddy786]

Re: so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

[Mani16]

Re: so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

Gul Bohtttttt Khoob Boht Piari wording as usual,,,
Ek do jga jo kafiye ooper neechay huye hain unka kia matter hy ????
kia yrhi mistakes aapne ooper likha hy ya koi or hain wo ????
Over all gr8 one

[I Am In Love]

Re: so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

Wah Kia Baat Hay
Bohat Khoob
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