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  • so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

    Assalam O alaikum
    Kuch maah pehlay aik tarhi muqablay mein yeh ghazal share ki...
    aik do spelling mistakes hein ! dar guzar kijay gaa!:)
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  • #2
    Re: so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

    Waah bahot khoobsurat gazal likhi hai aap ne
    lajwab
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    • #3
      Re: so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

      Khush rahiyay Wasi ! :)

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      • #4
        Re: so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

        mene aap ko ye gazal aur nazam Hijar save kar lin hain apni collections mein really bahot pasand aain mujhe
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        • #5
          Re: so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

          Buhat Shukriya ..Wasi ...:) Khush rahiyay..!

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          • #6
            Re: so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

            Waah bahot khoobsurat

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            • #7
              Re: so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

              Thanx jee ! Khush rahiayay

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              • #8
                Re: so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

                Aslam o Alikum

                kehtey hain first impression is the last impression

                aap ki pehli ghazal par k he dil khush ho giya. buhat piyara likthey/likthi hain aap. buhat acha laga parna

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                • #9
                  Re: so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

                  Thanx ...................!

                  Khush rahiyay ............ Gul Likhti hai ...:) .........

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                  • #10
                    Re: so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

                    ohhh ok


                    or aapko pata hai Tanha Musafir bhi likhta hai. aap ki tarah itna acha tu bilkul bhi nahi likhta lakin time pass ho jata hai

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                    • #11
                      Re: so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

                      buht khoob...
                      u can't gain RESPECT by choice nor by requesting it... it is earned through your words & actions."

                      :pr:

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                      • #12
                        Re: so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

                        Originally posted by Tanha_Musafir View Post
                        ohhh ok


                        or aapko pata hai Tanha Musafir bhi likhta hai. aap ki tarah itna acha tu bilkul bhi nahi likhta lakin time pass ho jata hai
                        Mein nay tanha Musafir ko kahin parha zaroo hai ..:)

                        Anyway ...Aap ki sharing ka intezar hai ...:) Khush rahiyay

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                        • #13
                          Re: so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

                          Originally posted by *Hala* View Post
                          buht khoob...
                          Thanx so nice of u HALA dear ...! Bless U :rose

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                          • #14
                            Re: so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

                            waah ji kya baat hai...bahoot achi likhi hai aap ne...

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                            • #15
                              Re: so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

                              http://www.pegham.com/forumdisplay.php?f=38

                              jahan neechay walay section mein sab new poets nay poetry share ki hai na
                              wahan kijay :) ...

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