yeh apni Khata hai Sadaa-eiN jo DeeN

[T@nh@ Mus@fir]

Re: yeh apni Khata hai Sadaa-eiN jo DeeN

k apno ney aisi jalayain jo dien........

aik dafa phir likha kamal likha bemisaal likha dil khush ho giya read kar k. lakin iss peotry k peechey main jo halaat or jazbaat chhupey hain unhain soch kar or feel kar k dil dukha mera. shayed inhi lafzon say mera maazi jurra hai ya main ziyada serious ho giya.

buhat khoob likhti hain aap plz kabhi likhna nahi chhoriye ga. pata nahi kion dil karta hai aapki poetry buss parta he jaaon.


i really like your poetry and your way of writing

[*Hijab*]

Re: yeh apni Khata hai Sadaa-eiN jo DeeN

bohat khoob

[muddy786]

Re: yeh apni Khata hai Sadaa-eiN jo DeeN

Lo phir se lout aaye mehfil main hum
Dostoun ne aisi sadaaein jo deen

Erum :phool:

[Nazia Amrin]

Re: yeh apni Khata hai Sadaa-eiN jo DeeN

kya bat hai bohat khoob...

[alwaysalone]

Re: yeh apni Khata hai Sadaa-eiN jo DeeN

k apnoN ne aisi jilayeN jo diiN..

ASsalam U Alaikum..

Umdah.. Khoob.

Kehna Buhat Kuch Chaahta hooN.. Per.. Tub Se Ab Tak.. LafzoN Ka Qehet ..............

Khush RaheN..

Ovais.

[EssWess]

Re: yeh apni Khata hai Sadaa-eiN jo DeeN

Very Nice Humapee.

[life.]

Re: yeh apni Khata hai Sadaa-eiN jo DeeN

Very nice -

[حیراں اختر]

Re: yeh apni Khata hai Sadaa-eiN jo DeeN

Nice!!!

[I Am In Love]

Re: yeh apni Khata hai Sadaa-eiN jo DeeN

Wah Kia Baat Hay
Bohat Khoob
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