Khalish!!

[Gul]

[Masood]

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Bohat umdah Gul - hamesha ki tarha achha kalaam :)

[Gul]

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Buhat Shukriya AAp ka janab! :)

[Masood]

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kahan tak shukriyah sey kaam lein gi? Har kalaam jo aap key zehan sey pedah hota hai, woh aik aala namoona hota hai, aur main to uski tareef karta jaoun ga, to phir aap kahan tak shukriyah karein gi? :)

[Gul]

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kahan tak shukriyah sey kaam lein gi? Har kalaam jo aap key zehan sey pedah hota hai, woh aik aala namoona hota hai, aur main to uski tareef karta jaoun ga, to phir aap kahan tak shukriyah karein gi? :)

Oss kalam ka tu [ata nahi jo meinnay likha ..
Magar aap kkalam ka shuriya tu mein adaa karti rahoon gee :) kion
k Tareef aur wo b aap karein ..Zarra Nawazi hai janab! :)

[WASI ANJUM]

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Waah bahoot mukhtasir aur dil per asar chhor janay wali
nazam likhi hai aap ne....really bahoot he khoobsurat

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

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very nice..

[Hashim Raza]

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bohot khoob

[Gul]

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Thanx hashim Raza ..Mujhe Kion lagta hai aap b poet hein ?
Kia mein sahi samjh rahi hoon ? bata-eyya ga zaroor

[Hashim Raza]

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gull... main poet hon ya nahin iss ka faisla to aap log hi karain gaye.. albatta kuchh toutay phutay lafz hain jo likh leta hon.. unn ko aap.. naey shora.. main daikh sakti hain...
aur han.. ap ko wo sab parhh kay lagta hai kay main poet hon.. ya nahin.. yeh bataiyeh ga zaror.... :)
khush rahin sada

[Mani16]

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Jitni aap kehain is Poetry ki main utni he tareef kerne ko tiyaar hoon

Wesay Esi sha,iri kabhi kabhaar he parhne ko milti hy

Outstanding Poetry+Design

[shummu]

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bahut khoob

[MeemSheenAlif]

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very nice

[*Hala*]

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zabardast Gul jani... i m one of ur grt fan of ur poetry ;)

[kemu]

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bohat achay