Neend Kho ja-ay tu...........!

[Gul]

:phool:

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Neend Kho ja-ay tu...........!

bahoot khoob janab
bahoot khoobsurat gazal hai

[Gul]

Re: Neend Kho ja-ay tu...........!

Thanx for reading and ur Comments Janab! :)

[tabish]

Re: Neend Kho ja-ay tu...........!

very very nice hai
GUL JI

[kemu]

Re: Neend Kho ja-ay tu...........!

bohat achay

[*Hala*]

Re: Neend Kho ja-ay tu...........!

buht khubsurat lekha hai Gul siso... be happy

[J.KHAN]

Re: Neend Kho ja-ay tu...........!

Are wah ji kya baat hai Bahoot bahoot bahoot nice GUL ji...

B NAPPY:rose

[T@nh@ Mus@fir]

Re: Neend Kho ja-ay tu...........!

Gul ji pata mujhe aapki poetry main sub say achi baat kia lagti hai???

true feelings....... alfaaz ka sahi or dil ko chhoo leney wala istimaaal

buhat piyara likhti hain aap. i think aap ko apni book likhna chahiye. realy Allah ney aapko buhat achey hunar say nawaza hai. use it

[Gul]

Re: Neend Kho ja-ay tu...........!

Ain Nawazish hai ...!
nazar nawazi k liya Buhat shukriya ...
aap Ki apni poetry kahan hai ...!
Share kijay na ! :)

[T@nh@ Mus@fir]

Re: Neend Kho ja-ay tu...........!

Arey main ney likhi tu thi wo Anchal ji hain na. unhon ney wo doosrey section main move kar di or mere naam say thread start kar diya. hehehe

[*Hijab*]

Re: Neend Kho ja-ay tu...........!

v nice