Ro-ay nahi Tu toot k.....

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Ro-ay nahi Tu toot k.....

Nikhray hain yun k harf harf ho rahay hain hum :thmbup:


Ahsaas ko lafzon mein dhaalna bhi her aik k bass ki baat nahin aur MashaALLAH ye kamal aap bht achha kar letee hain :)

[Gul]

Re: Ro-ay nahi Tu toot k.....

Rangan di iss duniya Under
Apney phikey naseeb mitaoudey rahye

Sanon lokaan naal reejan dey tukiya
Issi fair we sub noon hasoundey rahye

Naseeban saadey naal khilwaad cha kitaa
Ouh khaidedy rahey assi khidaoudey rahye

Ouh merday merday hasdey rahey
Assi jiundey ji we Rondey rahey

Saanon Dukhan diyan pathiyaan under
Saadey apney ugg sikhaoundey rahey

Ouh apni khushiyan di khatir
Sanon zaher da jaam piloundey rahey

Jinhan diyan khushiyan layee jee par duwawan karda san
Ouh saari hiyaati sanhon khushiyan layee tarsoundey rahey

Ouhdi khuahish di khaatir assi apni jaan ton gaye
Ouh lokaan wich beh beh saada Mazaq ouraaundey rahey

USMAN sadqey tere jigrey ton Ajey we tinoo shikwa koi na
Ouh apna aap wikhaundey rahey, Tusi fair we Piyaar nibhoundey rahey

je Osmaan sahib mujhay punjabi aati hai ..


Buhat khoob ....
True khiyalat se bharpur....Achi ghazal hay MashaAllah
Khush rahiyay :)

[Gul]

Re: Ro-ay nahi Tu toot k.....

Nikhray hain yun k harf harf ho rahay hain hum :thmbup:


Ahsaas ko lafzon mein dhaalna bhi her aik k bass ki baat nahin aur MashaALLAH ye kamal aap bht achha kar letee hain :)

qareeban 4 sal pehlay likhi yeh tehreer ...aaj k halat se mushabehat
kar rahi hay ..mein khud hairaan ho gaii parh k ...


harf harf Ho K bikhrtay hein na Eshaa dearO ..!
kioN k jab apna sarmaya sirf alfaz hee hoN ...
Tu zindgee mein harf rachay hotay hein ...
Kisi k aik jazbaati thokar se ....harf bikhar jatay hein ...
aur Phir ....Mushkil hee loat k aatay hein ...!

Khush rahiyay ...! salamat rahiyay :):rose

[T@nh@ Mus@fir]

Re: Ro-ay nahi Tu toot k.....

Thank you very much Gul ji meri hosla afzayee karney ka

lakin mujhe bhi apney jesa shayer banaa dein na plzzzzz

[*Hijab*]

Re: Ro-ay nahi Tu toot k.....

khoob, khoob

[muddy786]

Re: Ro-ay nahi Tu toot k.....

wah bohat hi khoob....