Chaman ko sajaaney key din aarahey hain

[Fatima Asad]

aslaam_u_alikam


dillon ko milaaney key din aarahey hain
"chaman ko sajaaney key din aarahey hain"

kahin bhool jaaun na khud ko khushii main
terey paas aaney key key din aarahey hain

khanakney lagey hain yeh kangan bhi ab to
keh sajney sajaaney key din aarahey hain

duaaon ney meri dikhaaya ye rang ab
hina ko sajaaney key din aa rahey hain

nazar aaye her su teraa hi yeh chehraa
naye geet gaaney key din aarahey hain

mujhe mil gayee mere khwaabon ki taabeer
ke jeevan sajaaney key din aarahey hain

chehkney lagey faatimah aaj gul bhi
keh shabnam churaaney key din aarahey hain.

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: Chaman ko sajaaney key din aarahey hain

W salaam


waah bahoot khoob bahoot umdeh chhooti bahoot hi dilkash kavish likhi aur share ki tumnien dili daad qabool karo aur yun hi likhti raho khush raho

duaaon ney meri dikhaaya ye rang ab
hina ko sajaaney key din aa rahey hain

nazar aaye her su teraa hi yeh chehraa
naye geet gaaney key din aarahey hain

mujhe mil gayee mere khwaabon ki taabeer
ke jeevan sajaaney key din aarahey hain

[Masood]

Re: Chaman ko sajaaney key din aarahey hain

dillon ko milaaney key din aarahey hain
"chaman ko sajaaney key din aarahey hain"

kahin bhool jaaun na khud ko khushii main
terey paas aaney key key din aarahey hain

Bohat pyarey hotey hain woh lamhaat jab kisi ka qurb hasil honey lagey. Apnaiyat yeh ehsaas bohat anokha hota hai, aisa ehsaa jis mein apna aap bhool janey ko dil karta hai. Khoob Fati!

duaaon ney meri dikhaaya ye rang ab
hina ko sajaaney key din aa rahey hain

Yeh hina woh aam si hina nahin hoti balkey yeh hina to muqaddaron sey lagti hai aur muqadron ko sanwarti hai. Har larki ko yeh hina mubarak ho :)

mujhe mil gayee mere khwaabon ki taabeer
ke jeevan sajaaney key din aarahey hain

Khawabon ki haqeeqat mil jaey to kya chahiye? Khawab to har koi dekhta hai - main ney bhi dekhey hain magar haqeeqat na'daarad.

Fati aap bohat khoobsurat andaaz mein ashaar kehti hain, bohat pasand aata hai aap ka likha huwa har kalaam - keep it up Fati :)

[Fatima Asad]

Re: Chaman ko sajaaney key din aarahey hain

W salaam


waah bahoot khoob bahoot umdeh chhooti bahoot hi dilkash kavish likhi aur share ki tumnien dili daad qabool karo aur yun hi likhti raho khush raho

duaaon ney meri dikhaaya ye rang ab
hina ko sajaaney key din aa rahey hain

nazar aaye her su teraa hi yeh chehraa
naye geet gaaney key din aarahey hain

mujhe mil gayee mere khwaabon ki taabeer
ke jeevan sajaaney key din aarahey hain

aslaam_u_Alikam

Big b :)

aik mudat hogi aap sey baat kiye huye really missing u
umeed kerti hun aap jahan kahin bhi hun gey ALLAH key hifz o imaan main hun gey gazal ko pasand kerney ka behad shukriya

jabhi yeh reply perhein mujh sey contact karein plzzzzzzzz

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Chaman ko sajaaney key din aarahey hain

achi ghazal kahi aap nay
pasand aaie
regards
uzma khan

[Salauddien Mengal]

Re: Chaman ko sajaaney key din aarahey hain

gret....

[Fatima Asad]

Re: Chaman ko sajaaney key din aarahey hain

aap sab a behad shukriya

[vajiha]

Re: Chaman ko sajaaney key din aarahey hain

:thmbup:

[pk12]

Re: Chaman ko sajaaney key din aarahey hain

hey
i read u poetry i like it so much its realy nice .......

by :clap:

[Omi]

Re: Chaman ko sajaaney key din aarahey hain

:) :salam: wasalm its such a nice poem i like it but one thing Fatimah
Get your poetry with still having "Masomiat:blush: "

[phototech81]

Re: Chaman ko sajaaney key din aarahey hain

nice boaht khub achi poetry hai
nice ghazal good
ager ye urdu main honti
yani inpage main hoti to zeda maza aata nice

[Nisa*]

Re: Chaman ko sajaaney key din aarahey hain

bahut acha lika hay
wasalaam..

[shahid_naman]

Re: Chaman ko sajaaney key din aarahey hain

nice sharing

[ArAbIaN gIrL]

Re: Chaman ko sajaaney key din aarahey hain

wah wah zabardast.