Zindagii ka koii nishaan nahin

[Fatima Asad]

aslaam_u_alikam
aaj kafii dinoN key ba`ad kuch post kerney lagii hun.
umeed kertii hun keh aap sab apnii qimatii aara sey zaroor nawaazein gey.
aik mukhtasir sii gazal aap sab ki muntazir.

zindagii ka koii nishaan nahin
rastoN kaa koii gumaan nahin

naqsh ulfat key mit gaye hain kiyun?
koii rishta bhi dermiyaan nahin

tujh pey qurbaan ae watan ! sab kuch
tujh sey bher ker to merii jaan nahin

jo samjhtaa na ho kisii kaa dard
wo to pathar hey us main jaan nahin

[Yaaram]

Re: Zindagii ka koii nishaan nahin

naqsh ulfat key mit gaye hain kiyun?
koii rishta bhi dermiyaan nahin
Bohat umdah Fatima kya khooob likha hay

[Fatima Asad]

Re: Zindagii ka koii nishaan nahin

aslaam_u_alikam

shurkiya adnan

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: Zindagii ka koii nishaan nahin

Assalaam o alekum,


wooooow beauty full bahoot umdeh aur saadaa sa likhaa hai chhoooti tumnien khass taur per yeh ashaar to bahoot hi umdeh hain

jo samjhtaa na ho kisii kaa dard
wo to pathar hey us main jaan nahin

daad Qabool karoo khush raho

[Nisa*]

Re: Zindagii ka koii nishaan nahin

tujh pey qurbaan ae watan ! sab kuch
tujh sey bher ker to merii jaan nahin
BAHUT ACHA SHAIR HAY\SHUKRIYA
WASALAAM..

[Z.]

[A.h.khan]

Re: Zindagii ka koii nishaan nahin

bahot hi khob bahot achi gazal hae ap ke liye ;;

who mere dil main ankhon ki nami ki trha jajb rahta hae....
mera muqadar nahi banta magar hanth ki lakiron main rhta hae......a.h.k

[raafi]

Re: Zindagii ka koii nishaan nahin

really so nice poetry......

[baqarkashmiri]

Re: Zindagii ka koii nishaan nahin

aslaam_u_alikam
aaj kafii dinoN key ba`ad kuch post kerney lagii hun.
umeed kertii hun keh aap sab apnii qimatii aara sey zaroor nawaazein gey.
aik mukhtasir sii gazal aap sab ki muntazir.

zindagii ka koii nishaan nahin
rastoN kaa koii gumaan nahin

naqsh ulfat key mit gaye hain kiyun?
koii rishta bhi dermiyaan nahin

tujh pey qurbaan ae watan ! sab kuch
tujh sey bher ker to merii jaan nahin

jo samjhtaa na ho kisii kaa dard
wo to pathar hey us main jaan nahin

Very Nice.

Fatima

keep it up.

Regards,
Muhammad Baqar

[ArAbIaN gIrL]

Re: Zindagii ka koii nishaan nahin

wah last shair bohat touchy hai
keep sharing