vaqt ko kis ney rok hey?

[Fatima Asad]

aslaam_u_alikam

[Masood]

Re: vaqt ko kis ney rok hey?

"Waqt ko kis ney roka hai". Baaz oqat koi apney khiyalon ki tasweer bnaey to us mein apna aks nazar aata hai. Aap ki is bohat khoobsurat nazm ney aisi hi aik kafiyyat pedah kar di hai. Aap bohat achha likhti hain Fatimah - Allah aap key qalam ko mazeed bulandi aata karey - ameen.

Masood.

[Z.]

Re: vaqt ko kis ney rok hey?

bohot shukriya Fatimah, itney payyarey aur sada alfaaz ka ...
Khush rahein aur likhti rahein,

[Yaaram]

Re: vaqt ko kis ney rok hey?

Wah Fatima bohat khoon nazm likhi hai aap[ne umeed hia ke aap ayinda bhi aisa hi acha likhti rahein gi shukrya :)

['SamRazi']

Re: vaqt ko kis ney rok hey?

Buhut Acha likha hai Fatima, Pata nahi tha tum itna acha likhti ho :)


Share kerne ke liyeh shukriya aur ainda bhi kerti rehna :rose

[La'hasil]

Re: vaqt ko kis ney rok hey?

Wah Waqat ko kis nay Roka hai BUhat khoob


BUhat acha likha hai Fatimah :rose

[WOH LARKI]

Re: vaqt ko kis ney rok hey?

boht khoobsurat see nazm share kjarnay kliye aapka boht shukriya Fatima.:rose :rose :rose :rose

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: vaqt ko kis ney rok hey?

W salaam.


waaaaaah waaaaah bahoooot khoooob bahoot hi umdeh aur zabardast kavish share ki tumnien chhooooti waaqaee waqt ko kaun rook sakaa hai ?? dili daad qabool karo khush raho

[Fatima Asad]

Re: vaqt ko kis ney rok hey?

"Waqt ko kis ney roka hai". Baaz oqat koi apney khiyalon ki tasweer bnaey to us mein apna aks nazar aata hai. Aap ki is bohat khoobsurat nazm ney aisi hi aik kafiyyat pedah kar di hai. Aap bohat achha likhti hain Fatimah - Allah aap key qalam ko mazeed bulandi aata karey - ameen.

Masood.

aslaam_u_alikam

nazm ko pasand kerney ko itni dheron dua`aoN key liye main aap ki mumnoon hun.

shukriya

[Fatima Asad]

Re: vaqt ko kis ney rok hey?

bohot shukriya Fatimah, itney payyarey aur sada alfaaz ka ...
Khush rahein aur likhti rahein,

aslaam_u_alikam

shukriya gul:)

[WorThless]

Re: vaqt ko kis ney rok hey?

Kahan rukta hai :) nahi rukta bohat khoobsurat likha hai bohat hee zabardast lutf aya parh kar jeetey rahyeh khush rahyeh sada abad rahyeh

[Fatima Asad]

Re: vaqt ko kis ney rok hey?

Wah Fatima bohat khoon nazm likhi hai aap[ne umeed hia ke aap ayinda bhi aisa hi acha likhti rahein gi shukrya :)

aslaam_u_alikam

bohat shukriya yaaram sahib

[Mehak]

Re: vaqt ko kis ney rok hey?

.... yeh kabhi ek haqeeqat thi
aaj yeh aik dhoka hai
waqt ko kis ney roka hai!

fatimah bohat hi khoobsurat likha hai- bohat achha laga :rose

[Fatima Asad]

Re: vaqt ko kis ney rok hey?

Buhut Acha likha hai Fatima, Pata nahi tha tum itna acha likhti ho :)


Share kerne ke liyeh shukriya aur ainda bhi kerti rehna :rose

aslaam_u_alikam

shukriya saima

[hayaa_n]

Re: vaqt ko kis ney rok hey?

Fatimah Ji aap ki yeh Nazm bhi bouhat khubsurat hay...keep sharing...aap to :masha bouhat umda likhti hain..:)