Aapni yaadon ki dunyaa sajaatey huey

[Fatima Asad]

aslaam_u_alikam


"aapni yaadon ki dunyaa sajaatey huey
yunhi chalne lage gham uthatey huey

jab tumhein mujh se chahat mili hai to phir
"yunhi mujh se milo muskaratey huey"

baat apnon ki ker key na mujh ko sataa
saathi saarey gaye dil dukhatey huey

chal diya bhai mera mujhey choor ker
maan ka daaman dukhon se sajaatey huey

sunaa aangan hua bhuj gaye sab diye
jab chala tha hamein wo rulaatey huey

meeri sochon ki dunyaa meiN ab tu nahin
keh diya us ne nazrein churaatey huey

ab nahin hai umeed_e_wafa fatima
tor dalo sabhi sapney jaatey huey".

shukria

[ahsaas]

Re: Aapni yaadon ki dunyaa sajaatey huey

jab tumhein mujh se chahat mili hai to phir
"yunhi mujh se milo muskaratey huey"


ab nahin hai umeed_e_wafa fatima
tor dalo sabhi sapney jaatey huey".

buhat umdah.....keep it up ..:)

[sohailmalik64]

Re: Aapni yaadon ki dunyaa sajaatey huey

Fatima bohat khub

khasusan yeh do ashaar


"aapni yaadon ki dunyaa sajaatey huey
yunhi chalne lage gham uthatey huey

jab tumhein mujh se chahat mili hai to phir
"yunhi mujh se milo muskaratey huey"

regards
sohail

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: Aapni yaadon ki dunyaa sajaatey huey

bohot he achchah khayal aur achchih shaari hai khush rahain aur muskuraati rahain

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Aapni yaadon ki dunyaa sajaatey huey

nice poetry...
bahoot khoob...

[ArAbIaN gIrL]

Re: Aapni yaadon ki dunyaa sajaatey huey

bohat khooob......