Baynam Nazmain

[Dr Maqsood Hasni]

Os ki nega-e-iltafat say
Peghal pathar bhe gay
Bola to qaba-e-ehsas jal gaee

Main nay ruswa keya hai tum ko?
Main to chup kay hesar main hoon
Yah shararat to Aankhoon ki hai

Aseri-e-zulf Aafat-e-jan sahi
Mehkaday say Aaee sada
Deen deyta nahain es say najat

Dard kay samandar main
Talash laytay hain log
Tinkay najat kay

Kashkol-e-gadaee thamnay say phelay
Wo zindigi ki bahoon main tha
Ab chalta pherta verana hai

['SamRazi']

Re: Baynam Nazmain

:welcome: to Pegham

buhut acha kalam hai share kerne ka shukriya :rose

[Dr Maqsood Hasni]

Re: Baynam Nazmain

Aap nay itnay khubsurat lafzoon main meri ejjat afzaee farmaee samajh
nahain pa raha kin alfaz main meherbani boloon.

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Baynam Nazmain

dr sahib
aap ki aik or mukhtalif si nazam parrhnay ko mili
soch k dareecho ko wa karti hoie
bohot acha likhtay hain aap
regards
uzma khan

[Dr Maqsood Hasni]

Re: Baynam Nazmain

uzma bachay
bayta aap ki mohabbat say labraaz daad or payar bharay jazbat ka meray dil main bara ehtaram hai.
Allah aap ko kushoon say mala mal rakhay

[Hamsafar]

Re: Baynam Nazmain

Wah Wah :rose

kia baaaaaaat hai doc jeee aap to lafzooo k doctor lagtey ho
boaht hi zabardast lafzoooon ki amizish ki hai aap ne
next aap ki acha poetry ka intezar hai

[Dr Maqsood Hasni]

Re: Baynam Nazmain

aap thek samjhay hain. meri doctorate or post doctorate lisaniyaat main hai
likin yah kalam bohat pehlay ka hai
kalam pasand karnay ka shukarreaa, meharbani