Chand gali to utra hoga

[Brijinder]

चाँद गली तो उतरा होगा
मुझसे शायद रूठा होगा

ज़हर प्याला दे कर मुझको
कुछ तो वो भी तढ़पा होगा

चुपके चुपके पोंछा होगा
आँख से गर कुछ टपका होगा

उसने ख़त तो भेजा होगा
मुझ तक ही न पहुंचा होगा

नींद उढ़ा कर मेरी वो भी
शब् भर छत्त पर टहला होगा
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Chand gali to utra hoga
Mujhse shayud rootha hoga

Zahar pyalaa de kar mujhko
Kuch to wo bhi tarpa hoga

Chupke chupke poNcha hoga
AaNkh se gar kuch tapka hoga

Usne khat to bheja hoga
Mujh tak hi na pahuNcha hoga

NeeNd uRa kar meri wo bhi
Shub bhar chatt par tehla hoga

[Admin]

Re: Chand gali to utra hoga

Usne khat to bheja hoga
Mujh tak hi na pahuNcha hoga

NeeNd uRa kar meri wo bhi
Shub bhar chatt par tehla hoga

Some memories are arised in my mind, kuchh yaadein jo dil ko bohat be'chain rakh rahi hain... Brijinder ji these lines are just faboulas :)

Dil ko tasali bhi di hai to kaisey - usney khat to bheja ho ga - mujhey tak hi na pohncha ho ga ...

[Brijinder]

Re: Chand gali to utra hoga

Mehwish,infact that is the real purpose of poetry ...that if it manages to evoke with intensity the same emotions in the mind of readers with which it was written,then it is a pice of suuceesful poem.thank you very much.I hope this stays in your mind for some time.

[S.Athar]

Re: Chand gali to utra hoga

Bohat Khob Janab Very Nice
Keep it up

[Brijinder]

Re: Chand gali to utra hoga

thank you for the kind words.I hope this poem lingers in your mind for some time.
Regards

[I Am In Love]

Re: Chand gali to utra hoga

Wah Kia Baat Hay
Bohat Khoob
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