TalkhiaN-3

[Brijinder]

TalkhiaN-3

Meray wajood pay phailee haiN taqdeer ki nadeedaa lakeeraiN
Nijaat jin say shayud main na pa sakuNga kabhi
Muqaddar bun kay milay hain gumnaamioN kay aNdhairay mujhay
Tasleem-e-fun ki apnay shayud un maiN lau na jalaa sakuNga kabi

Lahu-lahu jiya hai maiNnay har takhleek ko apni
Likha hai inhaiN shub ki taarikiaN laykar
Aur alfaaz kay paikar main utaaraa hai inhaiN
TanhaaioN main afkaar ki baarikaiN laykar

Umr bhar ka dard jinkay liayay paalaa
Aur duniya bhar kay rutbay choray
Akaylaa hi takraataa raha waqt ki aaNdhi say
Aur kitnay shokh paighaam moray

Magar aayaa na koi deedaawar apnaa
Aur tasvvur mera khlaaon main bhatkataa hai ab talak

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Nadeeda-blind, Tasleem-e-fun- recognition of art, takhleeq-rachna( creation)taarikiaN-blackness,afkaar-thoughts

[thefire1]

Re: TalkhiaN-3

Lahu-lahu jiya hai maiNnay har takhleek ko apni
Likha hai inhaiN shub ki taarikiaN laykar
Aur alfaaz kay paikar main utaaraa hai inhaiN
TanhaaioN main afkaar ki baarikaiN laykar

Just no words, its another lovely piece of great emotions in form of great words, you have touched my heart with your beautiful poetry and selection of lovely meaningful words, keep sharing and khush rahyeh :)

[Brijinder]

Re: TalkhiaN-3

Thanks a lot once again,my friend for these beautiful words of appreciation.

[Tanha Hassan]

Re: TalkhiaN-3

wonderful Great work :em:

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[Brijinder]

Re: TalkhiaN-3

I am very thankful for the beautiful words of appreciation.
Regards
brijinder