Talkhian-2

[Brijinder]

TalkhiaN-2

Tujhay aayaa na jo falak choonay ka andaaz
Gunaah bana di gayiN parvaazaiN meri
Ab mera qasoor hai kya teray ahsaas ki ghurbat
Jo dabaatay ho balaNd aawaazaiN meri?

Jab tu mehfiloN maiN ho mast firta tha
Karti thi meri umr tanhaaioN maiN riyaaz
Jab tu laga raha tha beparvaah qehqehay
Samajh raha tha tab maiN khyaaloN kay andaaz

Mainay ik ahud pay jiayaa hai zeest ka lamha lamha
Tunay tab jisay janooN ka naam diyaa
ZameeN jisko samajh na paayi
AasmaaN nay uska ahatraam kiyaa

Teray rutboN ki nahin ab koi kashish baqi
Samjhay to yeh bhi hai ik kamaal-e-phun mera
Jo bus riwaayutoN maiN dhal kar kay banay
NahiN ab woh mozu-e-sukhan mera

MaiN to khwaaboN kay geet banaauNga
Aur wusat-e-afqaar say sajaauNga
Tujh maiN himmat hai to aa jaanaa
Warna akaylay hi gungunauNga

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Meanings: Falak-sky, ParvaazaiN--flights, Riyaaz-excercise,abhyaas, Zeest-life,Ahatraam- respect, Mozu-e-sukhan-subject of poetry, Wusat-e-ahsaa--bigness of thoughts

[Tanha Hassan]

Re: Talkhian-2

superb no Doubt :em:

[Brijinder]

Re: Talkhian-2

Tanha saheb,thanks a lot for the kind words of appreciation.

[thefire1]

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Wow, once again and very powerful thought presented in very emotional feeling.... really loved it.... these lines what I liked the most.... keep writing dear you really speak your heart out in your lovely sharing
MaiN to khwaaboN kay geet banaauNga
Aur wusat-e-afqaar say sajaauNga

[Brijinder]

Re: Talkhian-2

As always,you give superlative appreciation which i dont think my poetry really deserves,my friend.thanks a lot