TalkhiaN

[Brijinder]

TalkhiaaN

Tu mujh pe karay sang ki baarish
MaiN zubaN bhi hilauN to gunahgaar banuN
MaiNney banaaya aazaadi ko ahud apna
Teri tamn_na ki maiN tera ahalkaar banuN

Meri takhleeq meiN nahiN jo shokhioN ke dum
To teri nazar meiN koi sukhnwar hi nahiN
MaiN afkaar ki hudd se guzar jaaney ka huiN Qayal
Aur terey jahan-e-adab meiN maiN koi shaayar hi nahiN

Meri zidd ki maiN isay rif_atauN pe bithauN
Teri shart ki maiN isay kuch neechay utaar lauoN

Shaayri mehaz byaan-o ishq-o-raqeeb-o saaqi-o-jaam nahiN
Yeh rah-e-irtaqa-e-insaani hai bus fasun-e-alfaaz ka naam nahiN

Daad apnay asha_ar ki isliyey shayud kabhi sun na pauNga
KaliyaN nishat-e-tasleem-e-fun ki shayud kabhi chun na pauNga

Apni apni jagah "Sagar"
hum tum dono hi majboor haiN
Main apnay ahud ka hamil
Aur teray myaar khud meiN magroor haiN
--------------- +Meanings:
Ahalkaar-subordinate,Afkaar-vichaar(thoughts),Rifat-uNchaai,Raah-e-irtiqa-e-insaani-path of human progress,Fasson-magic,Tasleem-recognition,ahad-promise

[Tanha Hassan]

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beautiful......................great poetry and wording

[Nadia khan]

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very nice sharing :rose

[thefire1]

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Dear Brijinder, once again you have touched my heart with you perfect selection of words.... I dont have words to appreciate such brilliant art, althought all words are great but these lines have created an immense amount of undescribable feelings in my heart:

Meri zidd ki maiN isay rif_atauN pe bithauN
Teri shart ki maiN isay kuch neechay utaar lauoN

Keep writing and sharing with us, khush rahyeh

[Brijinder]

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I am very thankful to all of you for the very kind words of appreciation.I request you all that if my poetry touches your heart,then please spread it around you and share it with like minded friends.If possible,please send these to the litrary magazine for publication as I live in New Zealand and also do not know the script and hecne can not acccess these litrary magazines.Thnaks once again.

[crystal_thinking]

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[Brijinder]

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Thanks a lot for the kind words.

[BANJARAH]

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Zabardast Jee!

[Brijinder]

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Thanks a lot for the kind words.