Bayzaar

[Brijinder]

Bayzaar


Tujh tak nahiN pahuNchati ab meray dard ki sadaa
Dil hai badhawaas ki aakhir kya hua

Tu hi mujhay bataa yeh insaaf kya hua
Kiska tha gunaah aur kisko mili saza

Bahut roya,tarpa,hua bahut bayzaar dil
Toonay magar kaha ab gham maiN din guzaar dil

Makhsoos meray liayay thay woh teray jo ahsaas
Halaat ki aaNdhi maiN shayad rehay na teray paas

Ab kisi umeed pay "Sagar" na tu thahar
Is aNdhayri raat ki shayad na ho sehar

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[thefire1]

Re: Bayzaar

Another peice of lovely poetry..... a very deep thought and lovely selection of words... I must say that you have a good vacubalry of Urdu words and you really understand and know the art of putting right word to express the right feelings.... well done dear aur isi tarah apni shayeri say hum sab ko mustafeed kartay rahyeh, khush rahyeh

[Brijinder]

Re: Bayzaar

Thanks a lot for the kind words of appreciation.

[Tanha Hassan]

Re: Bayzaar

waooooooooooooooooo very very nice sharing

[Brijinder]

Re: Bayzaar

Janab Tanha saheb,Thanks a lot for the beautiful words of appreciation.I hope this nazm lingers in your mind for some time.