Aik paghal nazm paghal samaajoN kay naam

[Brijinder]

Aik Paaghal Nazm Paaghal SmaajoN Ke Naam

Raakh barseygi aasmaanoN se
Fiza meiN bhar jaigi qabaroN ki haddiaN
Apna hi lahu bahyga dariya dariya
NiklyaNgay naNgay-jism murdoN ke juloos

Kuttay roiNgay muNh aflaaq pe dhar kar
Aur raqs karaNygee siyaaroN ki hookeiN
AaNkh barsa karEygi naalioN ke keeRay
Shab peetee phiraygi sooraj ki kai

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Aflaaq- skies, Kai- Vomit

[Mr.Khan]

Re: Aik paghal nazm paghal samaajoN kay naam

Brijinder jee,

thori tashreeh kar den ge :rose

[thefire1]

Re: Aik paghal nazm paghal samaajoN kay naam

shayeri main aap ki soch ki wusa'at boaht wasee hay, jahan tak meri naqis aqal samajh saki hay aap kisi aisay lamhay ka zikr karna chatay hain jab koi aisa anhona kaam hoga kay duniya shayer kay dili jazbaat ko jaan sakay gi jisay ab tak ignore kar rahi hay yaa samajhnay say qaasir hay,,, aagay aap mazeed tashreeh kar saktay hain,.... wonderful words I must say!! khush rahyeh

[Brijinder]

Re: Aik paghal nazm paghal samaajoN kay naam

This is a mood poem.I was trying to capture the sense of frustration which many of the sensitive people feel over the senseless rituals, rigidity and many times antiquated mindsets which tries to conform everyone to the same thinking.It is a cry about the society which stifles the diversity and sense of questioning in individuals.
Regards
Brijinder

[thefire1]

Re: Aik paghal nazm paghal samaajoN kay naam

Beautiful thoughts and very sensitive feelings, keep sharing, khush rahyeh

[Brijinder]

Re: Aik paghal nazm paghal samaajoN kay naam

Thanks a lot for the kind words.