hijr-o-visaal

[Brijinder]

Hijr-o-visaal



Fazaon ko phir vajeh si mil gayee mahakane ki
Afsurda badalon mein se chand phir muskuraya hai
Takhleeq meri mein phir aaney lagey hain shokhion ke dum
Labon pe phir koyee mast nagma ubhar aayaa hai

Phir se gaataa hai malhaar saaz-e-zeest mera
Phir se chayee hai takkh_ ul pe aarzuon ke ghata
Jhumti bal khaati hai barq umeedon ki
Phir se wafa ki zard aarizoN mein noor bhaa

Meri tanhaee bhi soyee hai aaj umroN ke baad
Main bhi khud se mila huin baad muddat ke
Dard ki aankhon mein bhi hein aaj massrrat ke aansoo
Tamanna ko milay phir se pairhan haqeeqat ke

Besood nahin mahabbat ki wus_ ataiN
Dil phir yeh mananay ko karta hai
Khird phir bebus si khari hai
phir jaagney ko karta hai

Aaj tu aayee hai to pathra gayee hai shikvon ki zubaaN
Kho gyay hain gilon ke bol kahin khalaaon mein
Meetha taanaa sa detaa hai beetee udaasee ka chehra
"Bhool gayaa hai "Sagar" usey vasl ki shuaon mein"

Abhi kuch pal mein toot jayega waqt-e-vasl ka dum
Phir se laut jayengey hum liye majboorion ke daaman
Tu meri ho ke bhi meri na hogi kabhi
Teri majboorian hain yeh duniya ke bemaar aqayud
Main bhi majboor huun in haalaat ke haathon humnufs meri
Aatee rhaa karo milnay jab talak mumkin hai
Kyuon na tab talaq ishq ko apnay
vajah miltee rahey jeeney ki
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Afsurda-Udaas, Takhleeq-Rachna,
saaz-e-zeest : instrument of life
takkh_ ul -Kalpana, barq- Lightening
aarizoN- Cheeks, pairhan- libaas
Besood-useless, wus_ ataiN-Vishaalta
Khird-Intellect, Junoon-passion,diwaangi
shuaon-rays, waqt-e-vas- Milan ka waqt
aqayud- usool aur riwaaz
humnufs- meri jaan(beloved),

[Tanha Hassan]

Re: hijr-o-visaal

Beautiful sharing janab

[thefire1]

Re: hijr-o-visaal

Great......... no words to appreciate this wonderful piece of art dear, it seems that you have put life to to these words, your thinking taken us beyond the imagination, and I could feel your passion, your happiness and your feelings at the time of meeting your loved one!!! I fell in the depth of the following words of yours and can make out that how desperately you were waiting for this moment as you dont have any words to complain or you dont want to waste your time in complaining and would like to take the full advantage of this short meeting thinking that this moment will never come again!!!

Meri tanhaee bhi soyee hai aaj umroN ke baad
Main bhi khud se mila huin baad muddat ke
Dard ki aankhon mein bhi hein aaj massrrat ke aansoo
Tamanna ko milay phir se pairhan haqeeqat ke

You inspire me with you power of thinking and power of words, the right selection of word is very important in poetry and reading your poetry I feel that you have a full command over it, keep sharing such wonderful words with us, khush rahyeh

[Brijinder]

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I am thankful to you for the beautiful words of appreciation..But you know many people dont consider it poetry,so take care when you pour your appreciation!!! ;;)
I am writing in the form of free verse which is the main stream form of poetry in almost all the major languages of world now.I also love the poetry of wazan n behar but i also want to bring into the consciousness that there are equally valid other forms of poetry.
Kind regards
Brijinder"Sagar"

[thefire1]

Re: hijr-o-visaal

Dear Brijinder

Thank you for your kind words, well, I dont know about others for me all those words written with feelings and love is poetry now whether it is free verse "Nasri Adaab" or in the shape of stanzas "Ashaaar"... I love the way you write and admire your power of putting right word at right place to express the right feeling :)

I am thankful to you for the beautiful words of appreciation..But you know many people dont consider it poetry,so take care when you pour your appreciation!!! ;;)
I am writing in the form of free verse which is the main stream form of poetry in almost all the major languages of world now.I also love the poetry of wazan n behar but i also want to bring into the consciousness that there are equally valid other forms of poetry.
Kind regards
Brijinder"Sagar"

[Brijinder]

Re: hijr-o-visaal

Thanks a lot for the beautiful words of appreciation.I value that.I hope my poems linger in your mind for quite some time and perhaps find place in some diary etc.!!!!
Regards