Teray Naam

[Brijinder]

Teray naam

Jab tu meri aagosh maiN hoti hai
Teri admundhi aankhain
Teray laraztay huay hoNt
Daitay hain bahut si ankahi baatoN ka pataa
Teray jism ki haraarat
UnglioN ki shraarat
NihaaN jaanay kitnay maikhaanoN ka nashaa

Jhatak kar khol daiti ho
Jab tum ghanay syaah gaisu
Aur bar jataa hai un paloN ka khumaar
Phir shiddat say woh jazba
Hai rooh tak mehsoos hotaa
Kartay hain jism jab us pyaar ka izhaar

Purmaaeni ho jaati hai meri hayaat
Hoti hai beshak mukhtsar si hamari mulakaat

Jab tu meri aagosh maiN hoti hai!Sach!
Meri zad maiN hoti hai jaisay saari qaaynaat

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[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Teray Naam

bahot khoob janab nice

[*Hala*]

Re: Teray Naam

v.nice bro.........

[muneeb143]

Re: Teray Naam

nice dear

[hashambutt]

Re: Teray Naam

bahot khoob janab nice

[Brijinder]

Re: Teray Naam

Thanks a lot for the kind words of appreciation.
regards
brijinder"Sagar"

[wafa_sadaatt]

Re: Teray Naam

AOA..
no doubt aap buhat achha likhtay hain aur wazan main hota hai aur aap waqif hain tehreeh k andaz say ...
mgr plz buhat close feelings ko TASHBEEHAT ka jama pehnanay ke koshish kegey ta k shayri ke khubsurti aur mayaar doubala ho aur kaheen bay hayee ka ansar na ho...
taa k parhnay waly ko baat bhi convey ho jaye aur shaiyree ka MAYAAR bhi apni jagha qaeim rahay,,, jari rakheye
shukriya.......

[kutkutariyaan]

Re: Teray Naam

Nice chiips

[Brijinder]

Re: Teray Naam

Thanks a lot for the kind words of appreciation.I was trying to evoke the imagery of intensity of love-physical and emotional-but never crossed the limits of decency,I think.It was an honest portrait of emotions that one feels.But if you still feel that this nazm went beyond the call of decency,I apologize for that and will take care that such intense poems remain in my diary.