Abhi na jao meri jaaN

[Brijinder]

Abhi na jao meri jaaN Abhi hai bahut raat jwaN
Abhi bahut hai subh-o-shub ke faaslay
Abhi neeNd kahaN abhi chain kahaN
Abhi to chalyN haiN yaadoN ke kafelay

Abhi kuch keh to leN kuch sun to leiN
Kuch dard ki kaliyaN chun to leiN
Abhi dil zara behak to ley
Abhi shub zara mehak to ley
Abhi meye kaisailee lagti hai
Abhi chandni mailee lagti hai
Abhi mahOl-i-sukhan bun to ley
Anjuman zara jum to ley
Abhi shub kahaN abhi shaam hai
Abhi khud ka hameiN ilhaam hai

Abhi sukhan meiN vo nashaa nahiN
Koi she'r peer-e-mugaN nahiN
Abhi dard ne ki hai ibtada
Abhi "Sagar" ne kuch kahaa nahiN

Abhi na jao meri jaaN
Abhi hai bahut raat jawaaN

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Abhi na jao meri jaaN

Abhi kuch keh to leN kuch sun to leiN
Kuch dard ki kaliyaN chun to leiN
Abhi dil zara behak to ley
Abhi shub zara mehak to ley
Abhi meye kaisailee lagti hai
Abhi chandni mailee lagti hai
Abhi mahOl-i-sukhan bun to ley
Anjuman zara jum to ley
Abhi shub kahaN abhi shaam hai
Abhi khud ka hameiN ilhaam hai


Brijinder ji, aap ki iss nazm mein aap k qalam ka badla hua rang acha laga. thanx for sharing:rose :rose :rose

[Brijinder]

Re: Abhi na jao meri jaaN

Thanx Muskaan.Mainay koi bhi rang apni zindgi say bedakhal nahi kiya kabhi.Har rang say bahut pyaar hai mujh ko,siwa nafrat kay siyaah rang say.is rang say bhi bahut kuch seekha hai aur insaaniyat main yaqeen aur gehra hua hua hai.
brijinder

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Abhi na jao meri jaaN

Assalm-o-Alikum WR WB

Bhot umda

FeaamnAllah

[Brijinder]

Re: Abhi na jao meri jaaN

Shukriya,meharbaani
Brijinder

[Shaim]

Re: Abhi na jao meri jaaN

buhaaaaaaaaaat khoooobsoorat !!!:)

[Brijinder]

Re: Abhi na jao meri jaaN

thanx for the appreciation.
brijinder"sagar"