ZiNdagi kyaa hai Jab sochnay baithay

[Brijinder]

ZiNdagi kyaa hai Jab sochnay baithay


ZiNdagi kyaa hai Jab sochnay baithay

Mai ka jaadu bhara mast pyaalaa hai
Ya ki tanhai kay seenay main laga dard ka khaNjar?

Mehboob kay hoNthoN ki sheerni hai
Ya ki zar-o-zameen kay khwaaboN ka naam?

Har nafs main zinda hairat ki taazgi hai
Ya ki subah ka shaam say ik thakaa sa rishta?

ZiNdagi kay hai jab sochnay baithay

[Aania]

Re: ZiNdagi kyaa hai Jab sochnay baithay

Har nafs main zinda hairat ki taazgi hai
Ya ki subah ka shaam say ik thakaa sa rishta?


bohat umdah Brijinder.....likhti rahye khush rahye....

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Re: ZiNdagi kyaa hai Jab sochnay baithay

buhat acha likha hai aap nay :rose :thmbup:
apni shairi hamaray sath share kartay raha karain :Rose

[Brijinder]

Re: ZiNdagi kyaa hai Jab sochnay baithay

I am thankful for ur warm words of appreciation.
Brijinder"sagar"

[Hassan]

Re: ZiNdagi kyaa hai Jab sochnay baithay

mukhtsir maga acha likha hay
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[WOH LARKI]

Re: ZiNdagi kyaa hai Jab sochnay baithay

Zindagi kia hey jub sochnay bethay...........Brijinder ji, barray mukhtasir aur jamea andaz mein aap ne zindagi ko socha hey. aap ki yeh kawish bhi dil ko choo gai....thanx alot for sharing with us.

[Brijinder]

Re: ZiNdagi kyaa hai Jab sochnay baithay

In a way,this isnot a complete poem but am not able to take it to the final conclusion.I have few poems which have just a line or two missing n then will be complete.I was wondering if i should post those n request readers to contribute to those missing lines.Any suggestion?
brijinder

[WOH LARKI]

Re: ZiNdagi kyaa hai Jab sochnay baithay

In a way,this isnot a complete poem but am not able to take it to the final conclusion.I have few poems which have just a line or two missing n then will be complete.I was wondering if i should post those n request readers to contribute to those missing lines.Any suggestion?
brijinder

Ji Brijinder ji, Why not??? Aap post kijiye aur readers ki triyaaaan dekhiye kia kia kertay hein hein aap ki poems k sath!:)

[Brijinder]

Re: ZiNdagi kyaa hai Jab sochnay baithay

Ha ! Ha ! Muskan u really have a sense of humour.But really I do believe that I can get those missing lines for my poem.i will post soon as these days i am not getting much time for net.i am busy looking for a home as my loan has been approved.This part of like is cumbersome yet so necassary.
brijinder

[Rabi]

Re: ZiNdagi kyaa hai Jab sochnay baithay

ZiNdagi kyaa hai Jab sochnay baithay


ZiNdagi kyaa hai Jab sochnay baithay

Mai ka jaadu bhara mast pyaalaa hai
Ya ki tanhai kay seenay main laga dard ka khaNjar?

Mehboob kay hoNthoN ki sheerni hai
Ya ki zar-o-zameen kay khwaaboN ka naam?

Har nafs main zinda hairat ki taazgi hai
Ya ki subah ka shaam say ik thakaa sa rishta?

ZiNdagi kay hai jab sochnay baithay

:cc: :cc:

[Shaim]

Re: ZiNdagi kyaa hai Jab sochnay baithay

:masha nice poem!!!