Bekhudi

[Brijinder]

Bekhudi



Ik mauj-e-samndar-e-qaynaat hai zindagi

Khud hi jwaab aur swaalaat hai zindagi



Khud ki talaash yeh safar-e-hyaat

Abhi din ki aarzu ab justju-e- raat



Kuch jaani pehchani raahon pay

UmroN kay qaafilay

Ghardish-e-doraaN main pinha manzilaiN

Kabhi manzil ka pa laina

Phir us say uqta jaanaa

Yeh shauq-e-manzil nahi

Shayud jeenay ka bus bahaanaa



Jab bar gayi bahut tanhai

Banaya phulsupha-e-khudai

But banayay banai azaanaiN

Phir sajaai rishton ki dukaanaiN



Jab jab bhi khud say uqtaiya insaaN

Daur-e-wehshat main laut aayaa insaaN



Is hajoom-e-zindagi main tanha hai har koi

Bus giraphat-e-khwaab-e-bahaanaa hai har koi



Ik bhatkan umr kay jaNgloN main

Liyay beqasi-e-namaloom diloN main

Har koi jiyay jaataa hai

Dard-o-masarrat kay ajab saNgam ko

Unwaan-e-zindgi diyay jaataa hai



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['SamRazi']

Re: Bekhudi

Bekhudi



Ik mauj-e-samndar-e-qaynaat hai zindagi

Khud hi jwaab aur swaalaat hai zindagi



Khud ki talaash yeh safar-e-hyaat

Abhi din ki aarzu ab justju-e- raat



Kuch jaani pehchani raahon pay

UmroN kay qaafilay

Ghardish-e-doraaN main pinha manzilaiN

Kabhi manzil ka pa laina

Phir us say uqta jaanaa

Yeh shauq-e-manzil nahi

Shayud jeenay ka bus bahaanaa



Jab bar gayi bahut tanhai

Banaya phulsupha-e-khudai

But banayay banai azaanaiN

Phir sajaai rishton ki dukaanaiN



Jab jab bhi khud say uqtaiya insaaN

Daur-e-wehshat main laut aayaa insaaN



Is hajoom-e-zindagi main tanha hai har koi

Bus giraphat-e-khwaab-e-bahaanaa hai har koi



Ik bhatkan umr kay jaNgloN main

Liyay beqasi-e-namaloom diloN main

Har koi jiyay jaataa hai

Dard-o-masarrat kay ajab saNgam ko

Unwaan-e-zindgi diyay jaataa hai



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Salam brijider jee,

aap ne jo likha mujhe laga zindagi per hai, magar umwan "Bekhudi" kuch samajh nahi aaya :cc:

[xoftspy]

Re: Bekhudi

very nice sharing

Thanks for sharing

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Bekhudi

Kuch jaani pehchani raahon pay

UmroN kay qaafilay

Ghardish-e-doraaN main pinha manzilaiN

Kabhi manzil ka pa laina

Phir us say uqta jaanaa

Yeh shauq-e-manzil nahi

Shayud jeenay ka bus bahaanaa


Is hajoom-e-zindagi main tanha hai har koi

Bus giraphat-e-khwaab-e-bahaanaa hai har koiDard-o-masarrat kay ajab saNgam ko

Unwaan-e-zindgi diyay jaataa hai


Brijinder ji! Once more you have brought a nice piece of potry for us, thanx alot:rose .


waqaee yeh zindagi aik safer e la hasil hey, Her koi issay apnay zaviya e nazer se dekhta hey.....pata nhi INSAN zindagi ko guzarta hey ya ZINDAGI insan ko waqt ki bhool bhulayyon mein uljha ker uss ki umer natmam ker deti hey?

[Brijinder]

Re: Bekhudi

Hi Muskaan,
It really pleases me when I get a descriptive n critical feedback on my work.Thanx for the words of appreciation.
I think we give life a meaning by being honest to it n not bring in the walls of race,colour n religion.Just live the life as a friend,And when we leave this world we should be honestly able to say that atleast we did not help in making it more ugly by indulging in violence-an environmental violence,domestic violence,religious violence,racial violence n so on.
Regards
Brijinder

[Masood]

Re: Bekhudi

Khud hi jwaab aur swaalaat hai zindagi

Zindagi key barey mein kaha jata raha hai aur kaha jata rahey ga. Falsafa-e-zindagi suljhaney ki bjaney uljhata hi chala jaa raha hai. Aik safr-e-musalsal, ik haqeeqat magar makhfi, aik soch magar dabi hui - har baat aik jumley mein khatam hoti hai: Khud hi jawaab aur sawalaat hai zindagi - Brijinder ji bohat umdah :rose

[ChEeNaThEgReAt]

Re: Bekhudi

Jab jab bhi khud say uqtaiya insaaN

Daur-e-wehshat main laut aayaa insaaN

wowwww..........bahut acha likha hia :rose

[Brijinder]

Re: Bekhudi

Thanx for ur kind words of appreciation.For a critical appraisel of my work plz visit ebazm.com/sagar .Mr khushwant Singh,foremost journalist,writer n historian of india ,has written the introduction to my works.
Brijinder"Sagar"

[Shaim]

Re: Bekhudi

Real sharing!:)
great work!

[Aania]

Re: Bekhudi

Ghardish-e-doraaN main pinha manzilaiN

Kabhi manzil ka pa laina

Phir us say uqta jaanaa

Yeh shauq-e-manzil nahi

Shayud jeenay ka bus bahaanaa



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