Nietzsche

[Brijinder]

My very personal nazm and which is very close to my heart.


Nietzsche

Siyaah hai raat bahut sar chupayay baitha hai mahtaab kahiN aasmaanoN main
Woh door door tak haiN afsurda-nasheeN sitaaroN kay lashkar
KahkashaN Saari sharmsaar si huee firti hai

Woh pashymaN sa khra hai Tammdun ki na-deeda nihgaooN ka swaal
KhwaaboN pay jhapat rahay haiN samaajoN kay uqaab
Hyaat roti hai zaar zaar
Taareekh junooN ka sung liyay hawaaoN ko soongha karti hai
Phir say hai raunaq-e-jashn ujray huay zehanoN main
Aaj phir qatl hua hai ik bedaar insaaN

Woh khaloos-o-ikhlaaq ka rasiya
Woh aashiq khird ki baharoN ka
Mar raha hai who luta kay aab-i-zeesat apna
Aur kehkehay lagaataa hai kargas raigzaaroN ka

Sadaaqat phir marsiakhwa hai aaj
Qaaynaat phir say Siyaah hai aaj

---Brijinder 'Sagar'
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[muskaan]

Re: Nietzsche

bauhat hi achi nazam likhi hia aap nai :)

khush rahiyai :)

[Brijinder]

Re: Nietzsche

Hi Muskan,
Thanx for warm apprecaition of my nazm.If a poem stimulates readers n helps in crystalising his/her thoughts/emotions,it is its own reward-haasil.
Regards
brijinder"Sagar"

[~*~khawab-e-gul~*~]

Re: Nietzsche

Nice Sharing

[Brijinder]

Re: Nietzsche

Shukriya,meharbani.
Brijinder"sagar"

[muskaan]

Re: Nietzsche

Hi Muskan,
Thanx for warm apprecaition of my nazm.If a poem stimulates readers n helps in crystalising his/her thoughts/emotions,it is its own reward-haasil.
Regards
brijinder"Sagar"

hi :)

i agree with u 100% hope u keep sharing with u :rose

[Brijinder]

Re: Nietzsche

Thanx Muskaan for the appreciation.This is my favourite n very personal nazm.It was written long back in the dead of night.It was like a tornado of words n emotions which got written down.
Its intensity can be felt by anyone who has known passion from very near.
Regards
brijinder

[WorThless]

Re: Nietzsche

Bohat hee khobsurat .. share kerney ka shukriya jeetey raho khush raho sada abad raho

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Nietzsche

Mar raha hai who luta kay aab-i-zeesat apna
Aur kehkehay lagaataa hai kargas raigzaaroN ka





hnmmm I m wordless here. just Thanx alot for sharing such a soul touching poem.:rose

[Brijinder]

Re: Nietzsche

Muskaan,if a poem lingers with a reader,it is good n if that becomes a part of readers' inner journey then it is truly its' Haasil-its own reward.
I request if you like certain of my poems,do share those with as many discerning readers as you can.
I shall be grateful.
Regards
Brijinder"sagar"