Hosh jab hamaiN kuch kuch aanay lagi

[Brijinder]

Hosh jab hamaiN kuch kuch aanay lagi
Tab umr hi apni larkhraanay lagi

Rahi quwwat bhi na peenay ki jab baaqi
Jaam saaqi bhi mera tab laanay lagi

Tharthraata hai taareekh ka jism
Hawa main bu-e-lahu phir say aanay lagi

AankhoN main nafrat liyay junooN ka daur
Raqs main hai wahshat,nafrat gaanay lagi

Jism kahay hai yaadoN main chalo
Rooh magar farad kay geet gaanay lagi
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[Masood]

Re: Hosh jab hamaiN kuch kuch aanay lagi

Bohat umdah Brijinder ji bohat khoob alfaaz hain lekin aik baat poochney ki jisarat karna chahoon ga - Jaam saaqi bhi mera tab laaney lagi - amooman to saaqi muzakkar hota hai na :p

[Brijinder]

Re: Hosh jab hamaiN kuch kuch aanay lagi

Masood,
Thanx for poiting out the glaring mistake.Even the first line of the first sher is wrong.Hosh is also masculine,I suppose.
I have to revise the entire gazal now.Thanx once again.
brijinder"Sagar"