Ghazal: Acar-e-Jaadu-e-Laila..

[Ameen Asim]

Aadab!

aap ahbaab ki khidmat meiN aik Ghazal pesh kar raha hooN hooN,

shaid kisi ko pasand aa jaay..


Wassalam

Ameen Asim

[thefire1]

Re: Ghazal: Acar-e-Jaadu-e-Laila..

Walaikum Assalaam

Wah bohat hi khoobsurat ghazal paish ki hay aap nay, aik aik shair apnay andar aik wusa'at rakhta hay, khayaloon ki wusa'at, mayaar ki wusa'at aur soch ki wusa'at. Mujhay sab hi shair achay lagay magar yeh shaair dil kay bohat qareeb say laga, kamazkam meray liye yeh haasil-e-ghazal hay.

Mujh ko hairat say sabhi log yahan dekhtay hain
Main woh darya hoon k sehra say nika aaya hoon

Isi tarah apni khoobsurat tehreeraiin hum sab say share kartay rahyeh, khush rahyeh.

Fi Amaan ALLAH

[Tanha Hassan]

Re: Ghazal: Acar-e-Jaadu-e-Laila..

Dear Bro I hope k yeh aap key ghazal buth achi ho gaye but i m so sorry k marey pass yeh ghazal open nahi ho rahi hai

[Mani16]

Re: Ghazal: Acar-e-Jaadu-e-Laila..

Poori ghazal dad denay k kabil janab
Aap pehlay kehaan chhupay huye thay,
Wakei aap bht achhay sha'ir hain
Bht achhi ghazal hui hy bhai jaan
Reputetion kabool farmaye

[S.Athar]

Re: Ghazal: Acar-e-Jaadu-e-Laila..

اسلام علیکم بہت ہی خوبصورت کلام ہےآپ کا آپ چلے کہاں گئے تھے 2005 سےجوائن کیا ہوا ہے اور آپ اب اپنے کلام سے روشناس کروا رہے ہیں اب آئے ہیں تو آنا جانا لگا رہنا چاہئے اب اتنی لمبی غیر حاضری نہ ہو۔:rose۔

[Nadia khan]

Re: Ghazal: Acar-e-Jaadu-e-Laila..

bahut hi khoobsorat ghazal hai :rose