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[aik_lerki]

:roseMere aik gazal ..:blush:

[khan]

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AOA,


Wah bohat khoob aik larki aap nain bohat acha likha hai muje pahle 4 ashhar aur phir akhri shair bohat pasand aya likhte rahye aur humain sonate rahain aap k kalam ka intazar rahye ga bohat khush rahain:lol


Sohail Abbasi.

[Yaaram]

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Chorian mehndi kangan payel kajol
tere lye hi yeh sighar karte hain
wah Zabardast aik larki kamal ki takhleeq hai aapki :)

[Masood]

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Waaaah kya khoobsurati sey iqraar kiya hai aik_lerki. Woh koi bohat hi khush qismat ho ga jis key liye yeh alfaaz hon ge :tang:

Bohat khoobsurat likha hai. Aap ka yeh andaaz bhi - yani shairana andaaz bhi kamal hai. Goodluck!

[aik_lerki]

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AOA,


Wah bohat khoob aik larki aap nain bohat acha likha hai muje pahle 4 ashhar aur phir akhri shair bohat pasand aya likhte rahye aur humain sonate rahain aap k kalam ka intazar rahye ga bohat khush rahain:lol


Sohail Abbasi.

Thankx khan :)
bech ky ashaar ka kiya kassor tha :p vo kio nahe pasand ay

[aik_lerki]

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Chorian mehndi kangan payel kajol
tere lye hi yeh sighar karte hain
wah Zabardast aik larki kamal ki takhleeq hai aapki :)

Thankxa lot Yaaram :)

[aik_lerki]

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Waaaah kya khoobsurati sey iqraar kiya hai aik_lerki. Woh koi bohat hi khush qismat ho ga jis key liye yeh alfaaz hon ge :tang:

Bohat khoobsurat likha hai. Aap ka yeh andaaz bhi - yani shairana andaaz bhi kamal hai. Goodluck!

Thankx Masood
umm haan wo to hai ..:eye:

[La'hasil]

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BUhat Khoobsurat Pyaari Larki BUhat Umdaah :rose


khush raho hamesha :rose

[Hassan]

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Hmmmm achaa likha hay........
or khawahish sy mujhy ye pochn hay kay osne jo mesge likha hay.
BUhat Khoobsurat Pyaari Larki BUhat Umdaah.
vo aik_larki ki ghazal ko daad dy raha kay tumhari treef kr raha hay???????
kuch pata chley ga kaya??????
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[aik_lerki]

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Thankx Khawahish & Sahil ki khamoshi..:)

vo aik_larki ki ghazal ko daad dy raha kay tumhari treef kr raha hay???????
kuch pata chley ga kaya??????

Ofcourse gazal ki he tareef ker rahe hain..aur usko he daad day rahe hain ..

[hayaa_n]

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Aik umda ghazal parh k khushi hui. :masha umda likhti hain aap. :)

[aik_lerki]

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Aik umda ghazal parh k khushi hui. :masha umda likhti hain aap. :)

Thank u sooo much Haya :)

[Hamsafar]

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Aray wah hamari baji itna acha likhti hain hamain to pata hi na tah

bohat hi piyre poetry likhi hai aap ne

akhri shair to bohat hi acha laga

Ban jaian tera naseeeb ye dua kartay hain

[*Hala*]

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haa... buht acha lekhaa koomal sisoo ...:rose

[Wafa]

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wow..dear komal tum waqae me bohot acha likhte ho....parh kar bohot khushi hoe.......:phool: