~ Tumhary Baghair ~

[aik_lerki]

[gazal_uzma]

Re: ~ Tumhary Baghair ~

bohot khobsorat ghazal
per agar aap "tumharay" k bajaye "tery" ka word use kartien ya phir 1st misray main aap nay "meray" ka word use kia us jagha agar aap "hamaray" ka word use kia hot tu aap ki qafiya bandi or behter lagti
just a thought :)
regards
uzma khan

[aik_lerki]

Re: ~ Tumhary Baghair ~

bohot khobsorat ghazal
per agar aap "tumharay" k bajaye "tery" ka word use kartien ya phir 1st misray main aap nay "meray" ka word use kia us jagha agar aap "hamaray" ka word use kia hot tu aap ki qafiya bandi or behter lagti
just a thought :)
regards
uzma khan

Thankx Uzma ji :)
:mm:umm Haan waqii keh to aap sahe rahe hain ..

[Madiha kanwal]

Re: ~ Tumhary Baghair ~

really great :thmbup:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: ~ Tumhary Baghair ~

Adaab!!!
Bohat khob,bohat achha likhty hain aap Komal ji :phool:

[Wafa]

Re: ~ Tumhary Baghair ~

bohot hi acha likhti ho komal....bohot pasand aae....:rose

[Hamsafar]

Re: ~ Tumhary Baghair ~

AAP TO kahsi achi poetry kerti hooo

bohat khubsurat likha hai

KUDHA aaap ko aur tufeeeeeeeeeeeq ata farmaye

[zeeshan]

Re: ~ Tumhary Baghair ~

ahaaa bht hi khoob koaml jee

[shummu]

Re: ~ Tumhary Baghair ~

wah....!

[Salauddien Mengal]

Re: ~ Tumhary Baghair ~

Bhth Khoob...

[ChaMpioN PaKiStaNi]

Re: ~ Tumhary Baghair ~

nice

[sham-e-mehfil]

Re: ~ Tumhary Baghair ~

wah bohat hi khoob

[shahid_naman]

Re: ~ Tumhary Baghair ~

hmmmm....
kaya bat ha very nicerose:rose

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: ~ Tumhary Baghair ~

buhat he aala jeee...!

[La'hasil]

Re: ~ Tumhary Baghair ~

Hmmmmm Buhat Khooob